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Today(11/24)
Today, I finished my task for job. very happy!
but,other tasks don't finish because my boss can't finished giving tasks for me.
He didn't come our workplace.
I don't know reason.
今日は私の仕事が全部終わったからすごく嬉しい！
でも、他の仕事は終わらなかったんだ。上司が私に渡す仕事を全部完成できなかったから。
彼は職場に来なかった。
私はその来なかった理由はわからない。
Today, I finished my tasks for my job, which made me very happy.
I am guessing that there were multiple tasks. Also, the job is yours, and hence you should have "my" before it.
very happy!
"Very happy" is not a full sentence. Instead, you should add it to the previous sentence.
but,However, other tasks don't get finished because my boss can't finished giving tasks for mekeeps giving me work.
Start each sentence with a capital letter.
Also, instead of using "But" as the start of a sentence, it is better to use "However".
Other than that, most of the sentence was correct grammatically, but didn't flow well.
He didoesn't come to our workplace.
I don't know the reason why.
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Today(11/24) |
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Today, I finished my task for job. Today, I finished my tasks for my job, which made me very happy. I am guessing that there were multiple tasks. Also, the job is yours, and hence you should have "my" before it. |
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very happy!
"Very happy" is not a full sentence. Instead, you should add it to the previous sentence. |
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but,other tasks don't finish because my boss can't finished giving tasks for me.
Start each sentence with a capital letter. Also, instead of using "But" as the start of a sentence, it is better to use "However". Other than that, most of the sentence was correct grammatically, but didn't flow well. |
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He didn't come our workplace. He d |
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I don't know reason. I don't know the reason why. |
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