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Today(11/15)
Today, I'm tired because working at all day.
Go home, I dive for My loved bath.
I felt very happy !
But, Tomorrow, Will work too.
今日は、一日働いたのでとても疲れました。
家に帰って、大好きなお風呂に入りました。
とても幸せに感じました。
しかし、明日も働かなければなりません。
Today, I'm tired because I've been working at all day.
GoI went home, I and diove for My lovedinto my favorite bath.
大好きは英語で「love」でも、「love」は英語で形容詞ではないです。「favorite」は形容詞です。この意味も「大好き」です。
I felt very happy !
But, T tomorrow, WI will work too.
Alternate natural-sounding suggestions:
"However, I will also work tomorrow."
"Unfortunately, I will be working tomorrow too."
"Unfortunately, I will be working tomorrow as well."
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Great Job! I was able to understand what you were trying to say!
Today(11/15)
Today, I'm tired because I have been working at all day.
Since you were working in the past, you can either say "Today I'm tired because I worked all day" or "Today I'm tired because I have been working all day".
"I worked all day" - simple past tense, so you worked and finished already
"I have been working all day" - present perfect, you worked all day and you are still working
Pick whichever one suits what you meant best
No need for a comma after "Today"!
Use "at" when you describe being somewhere. For example, "I was at work all day", where "work" here is used as a place. If you're using the verb "working/worked" there's no need for the preposition "at" :)
GI go home, I and dive for My into my beloved bath.
You need a subject before an action, clarify that it is you going home!
You need a conjunction between the two clauses, "and" in this case.
Say "dive into" since whenever you dive into something you're entering it, so "into" is what's appropriate!
"My" doesn't need to be capitalised, only proper nouns and the beginning of sentences do.
When describing an object as something you love, the correct word is "beloved".
I felt very happy !
Cute! No space between the last word and punctuation though.
But, T tomorrow, Will I will have to work too.
Again, only the first word of your sentence and proper nouns need to be capitalised.
Remember to put a subject (in this case "I") before your verb/action.
Saying "But tomorrow I will work too." is not wrong, the reason I recommend adding "have to" is because saying you "have to" do something shows you don't want to do it but you need to while the first statement reads as a more neutral fact.
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Good work!! Keep writing and you will improve :)
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Today, I'm tired because working at all day. Today Since you were working in the past, you can either say "Today I'm tired because I worked all day" or "Today I'm tired because I have been working all day". "I worked all day" - simple past tense, so you worked and finished already "I have been working all day" - present perfect, you worked all day and you are still working Pick whichever one suits what you meant best No need for a comma after "Today"! Use "at" when you describe being somewhere. For example, "I was at work all day", where "work" here is used as a place. If you're using the verb "working/worked" there's no need for the preposition "at" :) Today, I'm tired because I've been working at all day. |
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Go home, I dive for My loved bath.
You need a subject before an action, clarify that it is you going home! You need a conjunction between the two clauses, "and" in this case. Say "dive into" since whenever you dive into something you're entering it, so "into" is what's appropriate! "My" doesn't need to be capitalised, only proper nouns and the beginning of sentences do. When describing an object as something you love, the correct word is "beloved".
大好きは英語で「love」でも、「love」は英語で形容詞ではないです。「favorite」は形容詞です。この意味も「大好き」です。 |
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I felt very happy ! I felt very happy Cute! No space between the last word and punctuation though. I felt very happy |
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But, Tomorrow, Will work too. But Again, only the first word of your sentence and proper nouns need to be capitalised. Remember to put a subject (in this case "I") before your verb/action. Saying "But tomorrow I will work too." is not wrong, the reason I recommend adding "have to" is because saying you "have to" do something shows you don't want to do it but you need to while the first statement reads as a more neutral fact. But Alternate natural-sounding suggestions: "However, I will also work tomorrow." "Unfortunately, I will be working tomorrow too." "Unfortunately, I will be working tomorrow as well." |
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