Aug. 16, 2023
Today It Finally Rains.
Today it finally rains. It hasn't rained for many days until today. The air was very dry before, so I was anticipating strongly it could rain.
It had been a little stuffy before the rain, but once the rain finally came down, it was very cool and the air was very refreshing.
Although rain may be precious in a hot summer, it may also lead to disasters. If the rain intensity is very high and the drain system of the city can't bear it, a possible flood will submerge things and cause death. Nearly every year I heard news about devastating flood.
Today Iit Ffinally Rrains.ed
Today it finally rainsed.
It hasn't rained for many days, until today.
The air was very dry before, so I was anticipating strongly it couldwas almost certain it may rain.
It had been a little stuffy before the rain, but once the rain finally came down, it was very cool and the air was very refreshing.
Although rain may be precious in a hot summer, it may also lead to disasters.
If the rain intensity of the rain is very high and the drain system of the city can't bear it, a possible flood willmay submerge things and cause death.
Nearly every year I heard news about devastating flood.s.
Today It Has Finally Rainsed.
Perfect present. It has happened already.
Today it has finally rainsed.
IBefore today, it hasdn't rained for many days until today.
Pluperfect tense - past of a past. Something happened today and before that it hadn't rained.
The air was very dry beforehand, so I was strongly anticipating strongly it could rain.
You don't need the "it could", "anticipating" would suggest the potential to rain.
It had been a little stuffy before ithe rained, but once the rain finally came down, it was very cool and the air was very refreshing.
"it rained" here sounds more natural.
Although rain may be precious in a hot summer, it may also lead to disasters.
If the rain intensityamount of rain is very high and the drainage system of the city can't bearhandle it, a possible flood will submerge thingobjects and cause deaths.
It would probably cause more than one death so it would be normal to say deaths here.
Nearly every year I heard news about devastating floods.
Present tense. General statement of fact. "floods" as more than one.
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Aug. 17, 2023
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It hasn't rained for many days until today.
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Although rain may be precious in a hot summer, it may also lead to disasters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If the rain intensity is very high and the drain system of the city can't bear it, a possible flood will submerge things and cause death. If the It would probably cause more than one death so it would be normal to say deaths here. If the |
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Nearly every year I heard news about devastating flood. Nearly every year I hear Present tense. General statement of fact. "floods" as more than one. Nearly every year I hear |
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