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Tsuki

Jan. 7, 2025

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Today is the Laba Festival

I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home.However,we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.
Until I went to school that I know some in the north and some in the south people having Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eating on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.
Thanks for your revise the article. Happy Laba Festival with you!


回到家后才发现今天腊八,但是我们没有喝腊八粥的习惯,我只喝过八宝粥。
上学以后才知道北方人和部分南方人有喝腊八粥的习俗,腊八粥是农历腊月初八才会吃的一种传统食物。
谢谢点进来修正的你们,祝你们腊八快乐!

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Today is the Laba Festival

I knew today iwas the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Pporridge, I only eaten e Eight-treasure porridge.

Until I went to school I got to that I know some people in the north and some in the south people havingate Laba Pporridge.- Laba Porridge It is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

Thanks for your reviseions of the article.

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

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Tsuki

Jan. 7, 2025

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Thank you!

I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge, so I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

Full stops and commas need a space afterwards.

Until I went to school that I know somI didn't know that some people in the north and some in the south people havinghad Laba Porridge. - Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

You should use dashes or full stops, not both at once.

Thanks for you for reviseing the article.

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

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Tsuki

Jan. 7, 2025

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ok, I understand now! Thank you!

Today is the Laba Festival

I knew that today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,. I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

"I only eat" or "I have only eaten"

UntilWhen I went to school that I know somdiscovered/learnt that some people in the north and some people in the south people havinghave/eat Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

You can also say:
"It was only when I went to school that..."
"I discovered/learnt at school that..."
"It was until I started school that..."

Thanks for your reviseing/reviewing the/my article.

If you wanted to use the verb "to revise", it would be "revising".
But the verb "to review" sounds more natural, so it would be "reviewing".

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

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Tsuki

Jan. 7, 2025

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Thank you!

Today is the Laba Festival

I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,I. I have only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

UIt was until I went to school that I know somlearnt some people in the north and some in the south peoplare having Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

Thanks for you for revisewing the article.

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

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Good job :-)
Happy Laba festival Tsuki!

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Tsuki

Jan. 7, 2025

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Thank you!

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Jan. 8, 2025

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You're welcome.

Today is the Laba Festival


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I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home.However,we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.


I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,I. I have only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

I knew that today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge,. I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

"I only eat" or "I have only eaten"

I knew today is the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Porridge, so I only eaten eight-treasure porridge.

Full stops and commas need a space afterwards.

I knew today iwas the Laba Festival when I got home. However, we don't have a habit of eating Laba Pporridge, I only eaten e Eight-treasure porridge.

Until I went to school that I know some in the north and some in the south people having Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eating on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.


UIt was until I went to school that I know somlearnt some people in the north and some in the south peoplare having Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

UntilWhen I went to school that I know somdiscovered/learnt that some people in the north and some people in the south people havinghave/eat Laba Porridge.- Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

You can also say: "It was only when I went to school that..." "I discovered/learnt at school that..." "It was until I started school that..."

Until I went to school that I know somI didn't know that some people in the north and some in the south people havinghad Laba Porridge. - Laba Porridge is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

You should use dashes or full stops, not both at once.

Until I went to school I got to that I know some people in the north and some in the south people havingate Laba Pporridge.- Laba Porridge It is a traditional food eatingen on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month.

Thanks for your revise the article.


Thanks for you for revisewing the article.

Thanks for your reviseing/reviewing the/my article.

If you wanted to use the verb "to revise", it would be "revising". But the verb "to review" sounds more natural, so it would be "reviewing".

Thanks for you for reviseing the article.

Thanks for your reviseions of the article.

Happy Laba Festival with you!


Happy Laba Festival withto you!

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

Happy Laba Festival withto you!

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