Oct. 6, 2020
Today is a real autumn
Last month (September) the temperature still hot!
I go to work is using bicycle.
The journey takes about 20 minutes.
When I arrive the office or return home.
My whole body was cover sweat.
Especially in the morning shift when I return home is around 3 pm.
The heat will discourage to do anything.
But today is completely different.
Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with soft wind.
After return home I take a quick nap without air-condition then I running for 45 minutes.
That kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport.
Let’s build some muscles in this autumn.
Today is a really autumn
Last month (September) the temperature was still hot!
I go to work is usingby bicycle.
To say how you travel, say "By ...." So if you ride a bicycle, you go "by bike". If you drive a car, you go "by car". If you ride the train, you go "by train". If you take a ferryboat, you go "by ferry".
The journey takes about 20 minutes.
MWhen I'd arrive at the office or return home, my whole body was covered in sweat.
"When I arrive the office or return home" is not a full sentence. It is a subordinate adverbial clause telling "when". Combine with next sentence to be correct.
EThis is especially intrue for the morning shift, when I return home isat around 3 pm.
The heat will discourage to dos people from doing anything.
But today is completely different.
Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with softthere was a gentle wind.
After returning home, I takeook a quick nap without air-conditioning then I went running for 45 minutes.
Thatis kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport.
Let’s build some muscles in this autumn.
Feedback
Nice work. The days are cooler here, too. I am walking outside to enjoy the better weather.
|
But today is completely different. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Today is a real autumn Today is |
|
Last month (September) the temperature still hot! Last month (September) the temperature was still hot! |
|
I go to work is using bicycle. I go to work To say how you travel, say "By ...." So if you ride a bicycle, you go "by bike". If you drive a car, you go "by car". If you ride the train, you go "by train". If you take a ferryboat, you go "by ferry". |
|
The journey takes about 20 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When I arrive the office or return home. |
|
My whole body was cover sweat.
"When I arrive the office or return home" is not a full sentence. It is a subordinate adverbial clause telling "when". Combine with next sentence to be correct. |
|
Especially in the morning shift when I return home is around 3 pm.
|
|
The heat will discourage to do anything. The heat |
|
Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but with soft wind. Temperature was around 23C, no strong sun but |
|
After return home I take a quick nap without air-condition then I running for 45 minutes. After returning home, I t |
|
That kind of weather is the best weather for outdoor sport. Th |
|
Let’s build some muscles in this autumn. Let’s build some muscles in |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium