May 3, 2025
Today is a new day
I woke up and felt better. Yesterday I drank too much (10 cans of beer, which is really too much for me). Today is no deadline, no one asks me when this document is completed, and no client complains that my presentation is too difficult to understand. I wake up and see everything around me clearly. When people aren't restrained by anything, they tend to see things more clearly, without rushing to make judgments or considerations. But will that cause me to miss the opportunity? After all, today is still a new day, tomorrow is the same, and from now on it will be the same.
Keep myself going on
Today there is no deadline, no one asks me when this document is completed, and no client complains that my presentation is too difficult to understand.
Keep myself going on/keep going onwards
Today is a new day
I woke up and felt better.
Yesterday I drank too much (10 cans of beer, which is really too much for me).
Today ishere are no deadline, ns today. No one asksed me when this document is completed, and no client complainsed that my presentation is too difficult to understand.
I waoke up and seeaw everything around me clearly.
When people aren't restrained by anything, they tend to see things more clearly, without rushing to make judgments or considerations.
But will that cause me to miss the opportunity?
After all, today is still a new day, tomorrow is the same, and from now on it will be the same.
Keep myself going on.
Today is a new day
I woke up and felt better.
Yesterday I drank too much (10 cans of beer, which is really too much for me).
Today isI have no deadline, no ones. Nobody will asks me when this document iswill be completed, and no client will complains that my presentation is too difficult to understand.
If you use present verb tenses in this way, it is implied that asking you about the document or complaining about the presentation is a regular activity. Since that is clearly not true in this context, I adapted the verb tenses.
I waoke up and seeaw everything around me clearly.
Same comment as above.
When people aren't restrained by anything, they tend to see things more clearly, without rushing to make judgments or considerations.
But will that cause me to miss the opportunityies?
If you mean this as a general statement (which seems to be the case) it's better to put "opportunities" in plural.
After all, today is still a new day, tomorrow is the same, and from now on it will be the sames will every day from now.
KI will keep myself going on.
Feedback
Well done overall. Just a couple of minor verb tense issues.
May 3, 2025
Thanks!
My English grammar is not good, and I often get confused about using the English tenses. I mostly use the Present Simple and Past Simple, occasionally the Present Perfect.
Today is a new day
I woke up and felt better.
Yesterday I drank too much (10 cans of beer, which is really too much for me).
Today there is no deadline, no onebody to asks me whenif this this document is completed, and no clients to complains that my presentation is too difficult to understand.
I waoke up and seeaw everything around me clearly.
When people aren't restrained by anything, they tend to see things more clearly, without rushing to make judgments or considerathasty decisions.
But will that cause me to miss the opportunity?
After all, today is still a new day, tomorrow is the same, and from now on it will be the same.
KI must keep myself going onmotivated and keep going.
May 3, 2025
Thanks!
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