May 5, 2025
When I was a child I was very active and happy I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor child's outside
I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father friend's
I liked going to my grandfather's home and stay there to play with my uncle's children
My mother was working as a teacher sow I go with her to school
I was going to the mosque too every day in the morning to study Arabic
I really miss those days
Today i, I want to speetalk about my childhood
When I was a child I was very active and happy; I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor child's outside.
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I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father friend's
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My mother was working as a teacher sow I go with her to school.
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I was going to the mosque too e. Every day, in the morning toI study Arabic.
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I really miss those days.
When I was a child, I was very active and happy. I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor’s child's outside
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I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father’s friend's
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I liked going to my grandfather's home and staying there to play with my uncle's children
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I was goingent to the mosque, too, every day in the morning to study Arabic
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I really miss those days
When I was a child, I was very active and happy. I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor child''s kids outside
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I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father's friend's
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I liked going to my grandfather's homuse and staying there to play with my uncle's children
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My mother was working as a teacher sow I gowent with her to school
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I was going to the mosque too every day in the morning to study Arabic
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I really miss those days.
Today iI want to speetalk about my childhood
When I was a child, I was very active and happy. I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor's child's outside
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I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father's friend's
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I liked going to my grandfather's home and staying there to play with my uncle's children
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My mother was working as a teacher, sow I gowent with her to school
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I was going to the mosque too every day in the morning to study Arabic
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I really miss those days.
"When I was a child" is a clause, so add a comma after it
For something belonging to something else, add the ""s" to the owner, not the object/person
Added an "ing" after "stay" because "I liked going" and "I liked staying" exist on their own and aren't related to each other, so they both require ing, even if you already added one to the first one
"My mother was working as a teacher" is also a clause
"Went" is the past tense of "go"
"Too" usually goes at the end of a sentence
Today i, I want to speetalk about my childhood.
When I was a child, I was very active and happy. I liked playing with my friends and my neighbor's child's outside.
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I liked going to the beach in the summer with my familly and the family of my father's friend's
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I liked going to my grandfather's home and staying there to play with my uncle's children
.¶
My mother was working as a teacher sow I gowent with her to school
.¶
I was going to the mosque too every day in the morning to study Arabic
.¶
I really miss those days.
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