Aug. 18, 2023
Today I Stay UP Late Again
Today I stay up late again. It’s normal for me because I usually go to bed late. I don’t know the exact reasons behind this behavior. When midnight is near, I will become more peaceful. All my worries in the day seem go away. I really enjoy the silence and don’t want to end this enjoyable time. I guess my subconscious doesn’t want to face the chaos and noise in the day, so I procrastinate to go to sleep.
Sometimes I felt lonely at night, so I just wandered online aimlessly. I read different forums or social websites to alleviate my loneness, though it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
All my worries inof the day seem go away.
All my worries in the day seem to go away.
Sometimes I felt lonely at night, so I just wandered online aimlessly.
Like the other sentence, this should be in present tense unless you are referring to one specific night, in which case you would not use "sometimes," so "Sometimes I feel lonely at night, so I just wander online aimlessly."
I read differentvarious forums or social media websites to alleviate my loneliness, although it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
I read different forums or social media websites to alleviate my loneliness, although it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
Aug. 18, 2023
I would also usually write something like "When midnight draws near" or "When midnight approaches" rather than when "midnight is near." I think because this is something you describe as happening habitually/frequently, you don't usually use the future tense, you can just say "When midnight approaches, I become more peaceful," or "When midnight approaches, I usually become more peaceful."
Aug. 18, 2023
I read differentvarious forums or social media websites to alleviate my loneliness, although it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
I agree that "various" works a little better here; in my correction before I saw this one I think "social media platforms" or "social media websites" would also work, since they want to specify the sort of website they are traversing.
Aug. 19, 2023
Thank you very much!
Today I’m Staying UPp Late Again
Today I’m staying up late again.
It’s normal for me because I usually go to bed late.
I don’t know the exact reasons behind this behavior.
When midnight is near, I will become more peaceful.
All my worries inof the day seem go away.
I really enjoy the silence and don’t want to end this enjoyable time.
I guess my subconscious doesn’t want to face the chaos and noise inof the day, so I procrastinate to go to sleep.
I read differentvarious forums or social websites to alleviate my loneliness, though it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
Aug. 18, 2023
When midnight is near, I will become more peaceful.
I would also usually write something like "When midnight draws near" or "When midnight approaches" rather than when "midnight is near." I think because this is something you describe as happening habitually/frequently, you don't usually use the future tense, you can just say "When midnight approaches, I become more peaceful," or "When midnight approaches, I usually become more peaceful."
Aug. 18, 2023
I read differentvarious forums or social websites to alleviate my loneliness, though it is like drinking sea water to alleviate thirst.
I agree that "various" works a little better here; in my correction before I saw this one I think "social media platforms" or "social media websites" would also work, since they want to specify the sort of website they are traversing.
Aug. 19, 2023
Thank you very much!
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I really enjoy the silence and don’t want to end this enjoyable time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I guess my subconscious doesn’t want to face the chaos and noise in the day, so I procrastinate to go to sleep. I guess my subconscious doesn’t want to face the chaos and noise |
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Sometimes I felt lonely at night, so I just wandered online aimlessly. Sometimes I felt lonely at night, so I just wandered online aimlessly. Like the other sentence, this should be in present tense unless you are referring to one specific night, in which case you would not use "sometimes," so "Sometimes I feel lonely at night, so I just wander online aimlessly." |
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