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karlalou

Feb. 23, 2024

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Today, I Ordered Lots of Snacks! 🤭

I'm a regular customer to Instacart. Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks. This is because they are having a sale for these items. Most of them I picked were organic low-sugar ones, and also a bag of avocado. Actually, I just wanted some croutons for my tomato soup, but I can't just order a bag of croutons. I worry a little that the shopper will be irritated, but then their company was the one telling us to order some sandwiches from a convenience store. After all, I'm the one to pay the money.


今日はお菓子ばかり注文してしまった
私は Instacart の常連客です。今日は甘いお菓子ばかりたくさん注文してしまいました。これはなぜかと言うと、注文先の店でこのような商品のセールをしているからです。それでも私が選んだのはオーガニックで低糖のものと、アボカド一袋です。実は、私はトマトスープにクルトンが欲しかったのでしたが、クルトン一袋だけを注文するなんてことはできません。

買い物を代行してくれる人が苛立たないかと少々、気になりますが、でも、彼らの会社はコンビニからサンドイッチを注文するようにとも私たち顧客に言ってたんですよね。なにはともあれ、お金を払うのは私です。

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I'm a regular customer tof Instacart.

Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks.

Most of them ones I picked were organic low-sugar ones, and I also got a bag of avocados.

After all, I'm the one to paywho is paying the money.

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Nice job! I love Instacart, it’s so convenient!

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karlalou

Feb. 23, 2024

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Thank you! :)
You are, too!! Yes, that's a good service. I can't live without them.

Today, I Ordered Lots of Snacks! 🤭

I'm a regular customer tof Instacart.

I think "to" might be more appropriate for a physical location, but... preposition use can be hard to explain. ^^; "Of" can work for both physical and non-physical stores.

Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks.

Either "a lot of" or "lots of" works.

This is because they are having a sale for these items.

Most of them ones I picked were organic, low-sugar ones, and also a bag of avocado.

Ah... Once again, I'm not sure why "them" doesn't quite fit here. I think it's because we don't like relative clauses modifying pronouns, maybe.
Also, I think English has not decided if "avocado" is countable or not. If you bought whole ones, I think you can say avocado(e)s. If you bought some that were mashed up (almost like guacamole), you can leave it singular. But a lot of people just leave avocado singular in any case.

Actually, I just wanted some croutons for my tomato soup, but I can't just order a bag of croutons.

I worry a little that the shopper will be irritated, but then their company was the one telling us to order some sandwiches from a convenience store.

After all, I'm the one to pay the money.

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I use a similar service for getting groceries. I sometimes wonder the same thing about what I order because it seems really random, but the shopper never seems to mind.

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karlalou

Feb. 23, 2024

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Thank you! :)
Oh, you do, too. Instacart recent months doesn't accept refunds when the shoppers make mistakes, so that's scary, but I can't live without them anymore.

Today, I Ordered Lots of Snacks! 🤭


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I'm a regular customer to Instacart.


I'm a regular customer tof Instacart.

I think "to" might be more appropriate for a physical location, but... preposition use can be hard to explain. ^^; "Of" can work for both physical and non-physical stores.

I'm a regular customer tof Instacart.

Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks.


Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks.

Either "a lot of" or "lots of" works.

Today, I ordered a lots of sweet snacks.

This is because they are having a sale for these items.


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Most of them I picked were organic low-sugar ones, and also a bag of avocado.


Most of them ones I picked were organic, low-sugar ones, and also a bag of avocado.

Ah... Once again, I'm not sure why "them" doesn't quite fit here. I think it's because we don't like relative clauses modifying pronouns, maybe. Also, I think English has not decided if "avocado" is countable or not. If you bought whole ones, I think you can say avocado(e)s. If you bought some that were mashed up (almost like guacamole), you can leave it singular. But a lot of people just leave avocado singular in any case.

Most of them ones I picked were organic low-sugar ones, and I also got a bag of avocados.

Actually, I just wanted some croutons for my tomato soup, but I can't just order a bag of croutons.


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I worry a little that the shopper will be irritated, but then their company was the one telling us to order some sandwiches from a convenience store.


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After all, I'm the one to pay the money.


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After all, I'm the one to paywho is paying the money.

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