Aug. 15, 2023
Today, I Learned A Little about Superconductor
Today, I learned a little about superconductor. I read a news in the morning that several Korean scientists claim they have found a new material that can be a superconductor in room temperature. The news comment that if their claim is true, this discovery would be a milestone.
Due to curiosity, I searched on the internet about some introductions of superconductor. The superconductor is a very interesting material, it has nearly no resistance to electric current; it can also float on a magnet.
All materials that have been discovered can only become superconductors when the temperature is below a significantly low degree. So, if there is a material can be a superconductor in room temperature, it will bring another industrial revolution.
Today, I Learned Aa Little about Superconductors.
"a" not important so lower case. Plural - Superconductors.
Today, I learned a little about superconductors.
I read a news in thein the news this morning that several Korean scientists claim theyo have found a new material that can be a superconductor inat room temperature.
Something is "in the news". You would normally say "this morning". "to have found" sounds better, I think, though you could get away with "they have found". Something is "at room temperature" rather than "in". It is the same temperature as the "room".
The news commented that, if their claim is true, this discovery would be a milestone.
Happened in the past so past tense "commented". The part between the commas is a "weak interruption". You can take it out of the sentence and it still makes sense.
Due toOut of curiosity, I searched on the internet aboutfor some introductions tof superconductors.
If you do something because you are curious the phrase is "out of curiosity". The verb is "search for". Phrase - "introduction to X". And superconductors needs to be plural.
TheA superconductor is a very interesting material,: it has nearly no resistance to electric current; it can also float on a magnet.
Talking about superconductors in general so "a". General statement: explanation / clarification.
All superconductor materials that have been discovered can only becomefunction as superconductors when the temperature is below a significantly low degat extremely low temperaturees.
Adding "superconductor" between "all" and "materials" clarifies what kind of material we are talking about. I've rewritten the sentence to make it sound a bit more natural. "below a significantly low degree" is not how it would be said though I cannot explain why easily. Degrees in temperature should really have a number with it eg below -200 degrees. (If using numbers and as it is a science topic you might want to say degrees in what scale eg Celsius / centigrade or Fahrenheit.) You might be able to say "below a certain, very low, level".
So, if there is a material that can be a superconductor inat room temperature, it will bring about another industrial revolution.
Need conjunction "that" (or "which") between "material" and "can" to join them together. "at room temperature". "bring something about" means to cause something to happen.
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Good work. A topic with important ramifications for the future.
Aug. 16, 2023
Thank you for your corrections and detailed explanations. It helps me a lot!
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Today, I Learned A Little about Superconductor Today "a" not important so lower case. Plural - Superconductors. |
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I read a news in the morning that several Korean scientists claim they have found a new material that can be a superconductor in room temperature. I read Something is "in the news". You would normally say "this morning". "to have found" sounds better, I think, though you could get away with "they have found". Something is "at room temperature" rather than "in". It is the same temperature as the "room". |
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The news comment that if their claim is true, this discovery would be a milestone. The news commented that, if their claim is true, this discovery would be a milestone. Happened in the past so past tense "commented". The part between the commas is a "weak interruption". You can take it out of the sentence and it still makes sense. |
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Due to curiosity, I searched on the internet about some introductions of superconductor.
If you do something because you are curious the phrase is "out of curiosity". The verb is "search for". Phrase - "introduction to X". And superconductors needs to be plural. |
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The superconductor is a very interesting material, it has nearly no resistance to electric current; it can also float on a magnet.
Talking about superconductors in general so "a". General statement: explanation / clarification. |
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All materials that have been discovered can only become superconductors when the temperature is below a significantly low degree. All superconductor materials that have been discovered can only Adding "superconductor" between "all" and "materials" clarifies what kind of material we are talking about. I've rewritten the sentence to make it sound a bit more natural. "below a significantly low degree" is not how it would be said though I cannot explain why easily. Degrees in temperature should really have a number with it eg below -200 degrees. (If using numbers and as it is a science topic you might want to say degrees in what scale eg Celsius / centigrade or Fahrenheit.) You might be able to say "below a certain, very low, level". |
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So, if there is a material can be a superconductor in room temperature, it will bring another industrial revolution. So Need conjunction "that" (or "which") between "material" and "can" to join them together. "at room temperature". "bring something about" means to cause something to happen. |
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