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HelloWorld

Feb. 22, 2024

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Today, I had a weird dream.

I remember I was at the top floor of a house in my dream. I can't recall what had happened before. In front of me, there was a locked door, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it. According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and about 30 attempts were near success, but none of them could be actually called a success.

I tried again. This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where both sides of hills were covered with colorful flowers. Two groups of soldiers were on the two sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns. I had nowhere to hide from them when I suddenly had to run through the valley. A monster (maybe a zombie) behind me began to chase me. (I didn't look back anyway.) The sound of the monster got closer and closer...... then I woke up.

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Today, I had a weird dream today.

This sounds better in English.

I remember I was at the top floor of a house in my dream.

I can't recall what had happened before.

In front of me, tThere was a locked door in front of me, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it.

This phrasing sounds more natural.

According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and a. About 30 attempts were near successful, but none of them could be actually called a successcorrect.

Minor grammar and wording fix to sound a bit better

I tried again.

This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where the hills on both sides of hills were covered with colorful flowers.

Two groups of soldiers were on the two sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns.

I had nowhere to hide from them when I suddenly had to run through the valley.

A monster (maybe a zombie) behind me began to chase me.

(I didn't look back anyway.)

The sound of the monster got closer and closer...... then I woke up.

Feedback

I do dream interpretation!

The top floor of a house in a dream represents our mind, with a puzzle representing a problem we are still trying to figure out, especially with all those failed attempts. Interacting with the puzzle took you to a valley full of flowers, representing life and happiness. A valley is also where 2 strong mountains meet. On the sides of each mountain, there were soldiers fighting each other. This sounds like you have 2 conflicting views that are not in harmony with each other. They are fighting with toys though, so it isn’t anything too serious. The monster represents general fear and anxiety that is making you be in the middle of these 2 beliefs.

It sounds like your mind is trying to figure out how to be happy. There is so much menial “conflict” happening around us all the time. Even over simple things, we are expected to pick a side (Ex. “Are you a tea or coffee person?”). Social anxiety or some other type of fear is making you stay in that mental conflict zone of trying to figure things out while being bombarded by information by both sides.

You may be stuck in the middle of a small conflict between friends or family members. You may also have a hard time being decisive. If you struggle with anxiety, being overwhelmed with choices might be the cause of it.

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HelloWorld

Feb. 23, 2024

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Oh, I didn't expect to get a dream interpretation from this! The interpretation sounds interesting especially because I'm recently having a similar conflict. It has only been three or four days since I started at my new school. So I'm trying to make new friends while studying hard. Although I don't take my dreams seriously, I still enjoyed reading your wonderful feedback!

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JuiceGirl42

Feb. 23, 2024

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I’m glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to do 😃 Good luck at your new school! I hope it all goes well 😄

I remember that I was aton the top floor of a house in my dream.

Saying "in my dream" is not necessary here as it is obvious from the context.

I can't recall what had happened before that.

In front of me, there was a locked door, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it.

According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and about 30 attempts were near success, b. But none of them could be actually be called a success.

I used a full stop to break up the sentence and make it more concise.

This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where both sides of the hills were covered with colorful flowers.

Two groups of soldiers were on eithe twor sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns.

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HelloWorld

Feb. 22, 2024

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I'm new to this community and you're the first person who corrected my writi g! Thank you!

According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and about 30 attempts were near success, but none of them could be actually called a success.


According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and about 30 attempts were near success, b. But none of them could be actually be called a success.

I used a full stop to break up the sentence and make it more concise.

According to the statistics displayed on the door, I had already done over 9000 attempts to solve it, and a. About 30 attempts were near successful, but none of them could be actually called a successcorrect.

Minor grammar and wording fix to sound a bit better

I tried again.


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This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where both sides of hills were covered with colorful flowers.


This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where both sides of the hills were covered with colorful flowers.

This time, the puzzle sent me to a valley where the hills on both sides of hills were covered with colorful flowers.

Two groups of soldiers were on the two sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns.


Two groups of soldiers were on eithe twor sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns.

Two groups of soldiers were on the two sides respectively, and they began to shoot toy bullets toward each other with their toy guns.

Today, I had a weird dream.


Today, I had a weird dream today.

This sounds better in English.

I remember I was at the top floor of a house in my dream.


I remember that I was aton the top floor of a house in my dream.

Saying "in my dream" is not necessary here as it is obvious from the context.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't recall what had happened before.


I can't recall what had happened before that.

I can't recall what had happened before.

In front of me, there was a locked door, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it.


In front of me, there was a locked door, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it.

In front of me, tThere was a locked door in front of me, and I had to solve a spooky puzzle to open it.

This phrasing sounds more natural.

I had nowhere to hide from them when I suddenly had to run through the valley.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A monster (maybe a zombie) behind me began to chase me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(I didn't look back anyway.)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sound of the monster got closer and closer...... then I woke up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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