Aug. 19, 2023
Today I Dumped My Lunch.
Today I dumped my lunch. I cooked noodles for lunch with one egg and three different types of vegetable in it. I also added sauce in it. It is the first time I tried this sauce. I hadn't expected the sauce to be very spicy and salty. After eating a few times, I already had sweat and feel thirsty. What's more, one kind of vegetable tastes a little bitter, I suspected it was spoiled. But later I did some search online, it seems normal that the vegetable taste bitter in summer and it taste best in autumn and winter. I will never buy this kind of vegetable in summer anymore. Due to all these, I dumped my lunch just after a few eat.
Today I DumpTrashed My Lunch.
"to dump" is fine, but i changed it to "to trash" to make it sound more natural. "to trash" more so literally means to throw away into the garbage can. "to dump" can mean you just threw your lunch on the ground somewhere and left it
Today I dumptrashed my lunch.
I cooked noodles for lunch with oneand added an egg and three different types of vegetable in it.
I also added sauce in it.
It iwas the first time I tried this sauce.
I hadn't expected the sauce to be veryso spicy and salty.
After eating a few timbites, I was already had sweaty and feelt thirsty.
What's more, one kind ofof the vegetables tastesd a little bitter,. I suspected it was spoiled.
But later, I did some research online, and it seems like it's normal for that thekind of vegetable to taste bitter in summer and that it tastes best in autumn and winter.
I will never buy thisat kind of vegetable in summer anymore.
Due to all theseat, I dumptrashed my lunch just after a few eatbites.
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Aug. 20, 2023
Thank you very much!
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Today I Dumped My Lunch. Today I "to dump" is fine, but i changed it to "to trash" to make it sound more natural. "to trash" more so literally means to throw away into the garbage can. "to dump" can mean you just threw your lunch on the ground somewhere and left it |
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Today I dumped my lunch. Today I |
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I cooked noodles for lunch with one egg and three different types of vegetable in it. I cooked noodles for lunch |
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I also added sauce in it. I also added sauce |
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It is the first time I tried this sauce. It |
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I hadn't expected the sauce to be very spicy and salty. I hadn't expected the sauce to be |
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After eating a few times, I already had sweat and feel thirsty. After |
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What's more, one kind of vegetable tastes a little bitter, I suspected it was spoiled. What's more, one |
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But later I did some search online, it seems normal that the vegetable taste bitter in summer and it taste best in autumn and winter. But later, I did some research online, and it seems like it's normal for that |
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I will never buy this kind of vegetable in summer anymore. I will never buy th |
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Due to all these, I dumped my lunch just after a few eat. Due to all th |
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