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Tammy

yesterday

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Today' Hike

It was fun to hike with old friends.

The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired today.

I captured some videos and pictures. Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Today's Hike

It was fun to hike with old friends.

The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired today.

I captured some videos and pictures.

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

Today's Hike

Today's Hike

It was fun to hike with old friends.

The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired today.

I captured some videos and pictures.

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Good job. Sounds fun.

Today's Hike

It was fun to hike with old friends.

The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired now | I was really tired today.

“I was really tired today” would imply you were tired all day, even before you started hiking.

I captured some videos and pictures.

“Captured” is an unusual verb when the object includes “pictures.” “Took” would be more common:
“I took some videos and pictures.”

The object of “capture” is usually not a video or picture itself, but the subject of the video or picture:
“I captured some interesting scenes on camera.”
(“On camera” can mean either still photos or videos, or both.”

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Have a good night!

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Liag

yesterday

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I was curious about this use of "capture" after reading @JoeTofu's comment.
From what I read on the internet, it is a good use of the verb to say "captured some videos" especially if you are going to edit and post them later. "Capturing photos" can also be used. I think these may be more technically exact words, and most of us who are not as into photography as you are, @Tammy, would probably say "took," as Joe suggested.
I learn something every day on this site.

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It was fun to hike with old friends.


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The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired today.


The view was beautiful, but I'm really tired now | I was really tired today.

“I was really tired today” would imply you were tired all day, even before you started hiking.

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I captured some videos and pictures.


I captured some videos and pictures.

“Captured” is an unusual verb when the object includes “pictures.” “Took” would be more common: “I took some videos and pictures.” The object of “capture” is usually not a video or picture itself, but the subject of the video or picture: “I captured some interesting scenes on camera.” (“On camera” can mean either still photos or videos, or both.”

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Maybe I can show you tomorrow.


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