May 21, 2020
today
I did nothing today.
I woke up at 9 am, but I fell asleep again until lunch time. And then, I cooked a pasta which is called "Shirasu Mentaiko Pasta" in Japanese. The taste was so good;)
I googled its meaning. "Shirasu" means volcanic soils, and "Mentaiko" means spicy cod roe. Both of them are kind of seafood. Is it common among another country? In Japan, it's very popular menu at Italian restaurant.
If you have an opportunity to visit Japan, please try it.
After lunch, I went to bed again. Tomorrow, I hopefully would like to spend my time actively not be lazy.
Tomorrow, I hopefully would like to spend my time actively, not be lazily.
May 21, 2020
The other comment is also correct, just wanted to give you an alternative as well. Good job! :)
May 21, 2020
Thank you for correcting! I'm glad to learn many expressions.
today
I did nothing today.
I woke up at 9 am, but I fell asleep again until lunch time.
And then, I cooked a pasta which is called "Shirasu Mentaiko Pasta" in Japanese.
The taste was so good;)
I googled its meaning.
"Shirasu" means volcanic soils, and "Mentaiko" means spicy cod roe.
"Soil" usually doesn't need to be made plural because "soil" refers to any amount of soil. "Soils" refers to multiple kinds of soil.
Both of them are kinds of seafood.
Is it common among anin other countryies?
In Japan, it's a very popular menu item at Italian restaurant.
Alternately, "a very popular dish."
If you have an opportunity to visit Japan, please try it.
After lunch, I went to bed again.
Tomorrow, I hopefully would like to spend my time actively and not be lazy.
I think combining "hopefully" and "would like to" is okay because it reflects how many native speakers actually talk and write. However, technically you should only use one of them. If you combine them, one ends up modifying the other. The sentence says that you hope to want to do something, instead of saying that you hope to do something.
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Mmm, you made me hungry! I have never heard of this dish before today. May we both have productive days :)
May 21, 2020
Thank you for correcting nicely. Have a great day!
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I woke up at 9 am, but I fell asleep again until lunch time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then, I cooked a pasta which is called "Shirasu Mentaiko Pasta" in Japanese. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"Shirasu" means volcanic soils, and "Mentaiko" means spicy cod roe. "Shirasu" means volcanic soil "Soil" usually doesn't need to be made plural because "soil" refers to any amount of soil. "Soils" refers to multiple kinds of soil. |
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Both of them are kind of seafood. Both of them are kinds of seafood. |
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Is it common among another country? Is it common |
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In Japan, it's very popular menu at Italian restaurant. In Japan, it's a very popular menu item at Italian restaurant. Alternately, "a very popular dish." |
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If you have an opportunity to visit Japan, please try it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After lunch, I went to bed again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tomorrow, I hopefully would like to spend my time actively not be lazy. Tomorrow, I hope I think combining "hopefully" and "would like to" is okay because it reflects how many native speakers actually talk and write. However, technically you should only use one of them. If you combine them, one ends up modifying the other. The sentence says that you hope to want to do something, instead of saying that you hope to do something. Tomorrow, I |
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