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suonix

July 10, 2025

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I fall asleep while watching a movie. I woke up with a tremendeus headache and uncomfort and remove my laptop and phone off of the bed. I slept again. I woke up at 6.30 am. I spent some time by going to toilet, walking and finished the remain part of the yesterday nights movie. I just couldnt able to get out of the bed so i started to watch another movie. The movies called ummm what was it?? I checked out my Opera history but couldnt find the movie. There was a beautiful french actress. Also, she was playing in the movie The Beach i watched yesterday night. This is my all day with happiness and frustration. I am eating one meal since 4-5 day. I thinl I lost some weight. I am not on diet or trying to lose weight. It is just I don't have money to eat. Sometimes I am happy sometimes sad. Sometimes anxious then care about nothing at all. At that times I feel like I can do everything I can. I can travel to another universe with the songs. I imagine myself being a leader, businessman, traveler even a hippie pr psychonout. It is so strange that where we born determine who we are. We could be someone completely different. So Why this life?

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I faell asleep while watching a movie.

I woke up with a tremendeous headache and. I was uncomfort andable, so I removed my laptop and phone off offrom the bed.

I slept again.

You could also say: "I went back to sleep."

I woke up at 6.:30 am.

I spent some time by going to toiletusing the bathroom, walking, and finished the remaining part of the yesterday night's movie.

I just couldn't able to get out of the bed, so iI started to watch another movie.

The movie was called... ummm... what was it??

I checked out my Opera history but couldn't find the movie.

There was a beautiful fFrench actress.

You capitalize nationalities

Also, she was playing in the movie "The Beach i" that I watched yesterdaylast night.

This is my all day with happinessI was happy and frustrationed all day.

I am eating one meal since 4-5per day.

I wasn't sure what you meant by this.

I thinlk I lost some weight.

I am not on diet or trying to lose weight.

It is just I don't have money to eat.

Sometimes I a'm happy, sometimes I'm sad.

Sometimes I'm anxious, and then I care about nothing at all.

At that times, I feel like I can do everything I can.

I can travel to another universe with the songs.

I imagine myself being a leader, a businessman, a traveler, or even a hippie pr psychonout.

It is so strange that where we are born determines who we are.

We could be someone completely different.

So Wwhy this life?

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Not bad. Some parts didn't make sense, so I took them out. Overall, well done!

Today


I fall asleep while watching a movie.


I faell asleep while watching a movie.

I woke up with a tremendeus headache and uncomfort and remove my laptop and phone off of the bed.


I woke up with a tremendeous headache and. I was uncomfort andable, so I removed my laptop and phone off offrom the bed.

I slept again.


I slept again.

You could also say: "I went back to sleep."

I woke up at 6.30 am.


I woke up at 6.:30 am.

I spent some time by going to toilet, walking and finished the remain part of the yesterday nights movie.


I spent some time by going to toiletusing the bathroom, walking, and finished the remaining part of the yesterday night's movie.

I just couldnt able to get out of the bed so i started to watch another movie.


I just couldn't able to get out of the bed, so iI started to watch another movie.

The movies called ummm what was it??


The movie was called... ummm... what was it??

This is my all day with happiness and frustration.


This is my all day with happinessI was happy and frustrationed all day.

I am eating one meal since 4-5 day.


I am eating one meal since 4-5per day.

I wasn't sure what you meant by this.

I thinl I lost some weight.


I thinlk I lost some weight.

I checked out my Opera history but couldnt find the movie.


I checked out my Opera history but couldn't find the movie.

There was a beautiful french actress.


There was a beautiful fFrench actress.

You capitalize nationalities

Also, she was playing in the movie The Beach i watched yesterday night.


Also, she was playing in the movie "The Beach i" that I watched yesterdaylast night.

I am not on diet or trying to lose weight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is just I don't have money to eat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes I am happy sometimes sad.


Sometimes I a'm happy, sometimes I'm sad.

Sometimes anxious then care about nothing at all.


Sometimes I'm anxious, and then I care about nothing at all.

At that times I feel like I can do everything I can.


At that times, I feel like I can do everything I can.

I can travel to another universe with the songs.


I can travel to another universe with the songs.

I imagine myself being a leader, businessman, traveler even a hippie pr psychonout.


I imagine myself being a leader, a businessman, a traveler, or even a hippie pr psychonout.

It is so strange that where we born determine who we are.


It is so strange that where we are born determines who we are.

We could be someone completely different.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So Why this life?


So Wwhy this life?

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