June 27, 2025
I woke up at 9 am. and I was very sleepy in the morning. I really want to solve my sleep deprivation problem but I can't sleep early in the nights especially in summer nights. Then, I had breakfast with my mom because my dad had a seminar this morning. After spending time with my mom I took a printout the university exam which occured last week. And I started to solve english questions but my score was not that good. I had to review my mistakes but I am not good at facing my mistakes. I think I am a bit of perfectionist. After that I watched gilmore girls. And that's all...
Saat 9da uyandım ve sabah çok uykuluydum. gerçekten uykusuzluk problemimi çözmek istiyorum ama geceleri erken uyuyamıyorum özellikle yaz geceleri. sonra, annemle kahvaltı yaptım çünkü babamın bu sabah bir semineri vardı. annemle vakit geçirdikten sonra geçen hafta gerçekleşen üniversite sınavının bir çıktısını aldım. ve ingilizce sorularını çözmeye başladım ama skorum o kadar da iyi değildi. hatalarımı gözden geçirmem gerekiyordu ama hatalarımla yüzleşmek konusunda iyi değilim. sanırım biraz mükemmeliyetçiyim. sonra gilmore girls izledim . ve hepsi bu...
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I woke up at 9 a.m. in the morning
(1) You either write "a.m." with both periods or "am" with none at all.
(2) It is more natural to move the phrase "in the morning" from the end of the sentence here. From my experience, the specific time and time of day generally come together: "9 a.m. in the morning" is treated as one phrase. If you want to separate them, then the time of the day will typically come first, as we often first start with the less specific information. However, this may still sound a little less natural.
> "I woke up at 9 a.m. in the morning." ✅
> "In the morning, I woke up at 9 a.m." 👍
> "At 9 a.m., I woke up in the morning." ❌
and I was very sleepy in the morning.
It is more natural to omit the second "I", as you have already used it at the start of the same sentence.
I really want to solve my sleep deprivation problem but I can't sleep early in theat nights, especially ion summer nights.
(1) A comma will typically precede "especially".
(2) The preposition to use with phrases like "summer nights" is "on" and not "in". Here's another example: "I like to have a hot beverage on winter nights."
Then, I had breakfast with my mom because my dad had a seminar this morning.
After spending time with my momher I took a printout of the university exam which occurred last week.
I would replace "my mom" with "her" to avoid excessive use of "my mom". It is generally good practice to avoid explicitly repeating the subject too many times. The reader will understand who "her" is referring to.
And I started to solve eEnglish questions but my score was not that good.
(1) "English" is the name of a language, so it's a proper noun and should be capitalised.
(2) Starting a sentence with "and" is not wrong, but here's how I would write it:
"After spending time with her I took a printout of the university exam which occurred last week and started to solve English problems. However, my score was not that good."
I would prefer this, since writing "took a printout" and "started to solve" in the same sentence emphasises that they were things that occurred in succession and establishes an order of events.
I had to review my mistakes but I am not good at facing my mistakes.
I think I am a bit of a perfectionist.
After that I watched gGilmore gGirls.
"Gilmore Girls" is the name of a drama series and should be properly capitalised.
And that's all...
Today This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I woke up at 9 am. I woke up at 9 a.m. in the morning (1) You either write "a.m." with both periods or "am" with none at all. (2) It is more natural to move the phrase "in the morning" from the end of the sentence here. From my experience, the specific time and time of day generally come together: "9 a.m. in the morning" is treated as one phrase. If you want to separate them, then the time of the day will typically come first, as we often first start with the less specific information. However, this may still sound a little less natural. > "I woke up at 9 a.m. in the morning." ✅ > "In the morning, I woke up at 9 a.m." 👍 > "At 9 a.m., I woke up in the morning." ❌ |
and I was very sleepy in the morning. and It is more natural to omit the second "I", as you have already used it at the start of the same sentence. |
I really want to solve my sleep deprivation problem but I can't sleep early in the nights especially in summer nights. I really want to solve my sleep deprivation problem but I can't sleep early (1) A comma will typically precede "especially". (2) The preposition to use with phrases like "summer nights" is "on" and not "in". Here's another example: "I like to have a hot beverage on winter nights." |
Then, I had breakfast with my mom because my dad had a seminar this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After spending time with my mom I took a printout the university exam which occured last week. After spending time with I would replace "my mom" with "her" to avoid excessive use of "my mom". It is generally good practice to avoid explicitly repeating the subject too many times. The reader will understand who "her" is referring to. |
And I started to solve english questions but my score was not that good. And I started to solve (1) "English" is the name of a language, so it's a proper noun and should be capitalised. (2) Starting a sentence with "and" is not wrong, but here's how I would write it: "After spending time with her I took a printout of the university exam which occurred last week and started to solve English problems. However, my score was not that good." I would prefer this, since writing "took a printout" and "started to solve" in the same sentence emphasises that they were things that occurred in succession and establishes an order of events. |
I think I am a bit of perfectionist. I think I am a bit of a perfectionist. |
I had to review my mistakes but I am not good at facing my mistakes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After that I watched gilmore girls. After that I watched "Gilmore Girls" is the name of a drama series and should be properly capitalised. |
And that's all... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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