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Feb. 23, 2020

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Writing is a daily struggle. I never know what to jot down, especially when it comes to IELTS or some formal stuff. For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything  that I'll probably write an entry about. I've never passed the IELTS exam. Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it. Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS, then wrote my first essay. As a result, it turned out dreadful and weird, even though it's just an introduction and half of the first paragraph. Additionally, I mixed up informal and formal styles together. The topic was about crime if you're interested. I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips to try and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass. In spite of an hour of writing the essay and racking my brain, I didn't lose the motivation to keep on improving. Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

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For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything wthat I'll probably write an entry about it.

Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS; then wrote my first essay.

Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

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Just a little grammar stuff. I think a lot of your sentences are actually totally grammatically correct, but then some of the stuff seems a little weird compared to normal English. This mostly has to do with word order and word choice. But great job!

For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything what I probably write an entry about it.

I don't understand this exactly.

I've never passed the IELTS exam, n. Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it.

The topic is about crime providing that you're interested in.

I am not sure here either.

I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips so as to get a high score on the exam, or at least a score that is enough to pass.

Today

Writing is a daily struggle.

I never know what to jot down, especially when it comes to IELTS or some formal stuff.

For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything wthat I'll probably write an entry about it.

I've never passed the IELTS exam.

Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it.

Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS; then wrote my first essay.

As a result, it turned out dreadful and weird, even though it's just an introduction and half of the first paragraph.

Additionally, I mixed up informal and formal styles together.

The topic was about crime if you're interested in.

I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips sto as totry and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass.

In spite of an hour of writing the essay and racking my brain, I didn't lose the motivation to keep on improving.

Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to lack of idea on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

Feedback

Just a few very minor mistakes. I hope you pass the exam! :)

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Writing is a daily struggle.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I never know what to jot down, especially when it comes to IELTS or some formal stuff.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything what I probably write an entry about it.


For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything what I probably write an entry about it.

I don't understand this exactly.

I've never passed the IELTS exam, nonetheless, I'd like to pass it.


I've never passed the IELTS exam, n. Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it.

Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS; then wrote my first essay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS; then wrote my first essay.

As a result, it turned out dreadful and weird, even though it's just an introduction and half of the first paragraph.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Additionally, I mixed up informal and formal styles together.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The topic is about crime providing that you're interested in.


The topic is about crime providing that you're interested in.

I am not sure here either.

I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tip so as to get a high score on the exam, at least a score that is enough to pass.


I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips so as to get a high score on the exam, or at least a score that is enough to pass.

In spite of an hour of writing the essay and racking my brain, I didn't lose the motivation to keep on improving.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Still, I procrastinate sometimes due to no idea how to answer the IELTS essay question.


For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything what I'll probably write an entry about it.


For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything wthat I'll probably write an entry about it.

For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything wthat I'll probably write an entry about it.

I've never passed the IELTS exam.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The topic was about crime if you're interested in.


The topic was about crime if you're interested in.

I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips so as to get a high score on the exam, at least a score that is enough to pass.


I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips so as to get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass.


I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips sto as totry and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass.

Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to lack of idea how to answer the IELTS essay question.


Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to lack of idea on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything  that I'll probably write an entry about.


Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS, then wrote my first essay.


The topic was about crime if you're interested.


I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips to try and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass.


Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.


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