Aug. 12, 2024
Today
It's finally a little cooler today.
There was a rainstorm in the afternoon, so it was not as hot as yesterday when I jogged along the river near my apartment. But still, I was sweating when I got home.
I'm a little tired now, so I'm going to shower and then go to bed.
Why didn't I shower immediately when I came back? Because I was told when I was a kid that I should wait at least 30 minutes before showering if I was sweating.
It's a piece of weird advice from my great-grandma.
But the weirder thing is that if I don't wait and go shower while sweating, I will not feel well.
I miss my great-grandma and her many weird and useful advice.
今天终于凉快一点了。
下午下了场暴雨，所以当我沿着公寓附近的河边慢跑时，天气不像昨天那么热了。但当我到家时，还是满头大汗。
现在有点累了，所以我要洗个澡然后去睡觉。
为什么我回来后没有马上洗澡呢？因为小时候我就被告知，要是出汗了，就至少等30分钟再洗澡。
这是我曾祖母给我的一条奇怪的建议。
但更奇怪的是，如果我不等一等，在出汗的时候就洗澡，我就会感觉不舒服。
我想念我的曾祖母和她的许多奇怪而有用的建议。
Today
It's finally a little cooler today.
There was a rainstorm in the afternoon, so it was not as hot as yesterday when I jogged along the river near my apartment.
But still, I was sweating when I got home.
I'm a little tired now, so I'm going to shower and then go to bed.
Why didn't I shower immediately when I came back?
Because I was told when I was a kid that I should wait at least 30 minutes before showering if I was sweating.
It's a piece of weird advice from my great-grandma.
But the weirder thing is that if I don't wait and go shower while sweating, I will not feel well.
I miss my great-grandma and her many weird and useful advice.
Aug. 14, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Today
It's finally a little cooler today.
There was a rainstorm in the afternoon, so it was not as hot as yesterday when I jogged along the river near my apartment.
But sStill, I was sweating when I got home.
I'm a little tired now, so I'm going to shower and then go to bed.
Why didn't I shower immediately when I came back?
Because I was told when I was a kid that I should wait at least 30 minutes before showering if I was sweating.
It's a weird piece of weird advice from my great- grandma.
ButHowever, the weirder thing is that if I don't wait and go shower while sweating, I will not feel well.
I miss my great- grandma and her manynumerous weird and usefuloddly useful ¶
pieces of advice.
Feedback
I'm sure that she's proud of you. RIP your great grandma.
Aug. 14, 2024
Thank you very much!
Aug. 14, 2024
You're welcome.
Today
It's finally a little cooler today.
There was a rainstorm in the afternoon, so it was not as hot as yesterday when I jogged along the river near my apartment.
But still, I was sweating when I got home.
I'm a little tired now, so I'm going to shower and then go to bed.
Why didn't I shower immediately when I came back?
Because I was told when I was a kid that I should wait at least 30 minutes before showering if I was sweating.
It's a piece of weird advice from my great-grandma.
But the weirder thing is that if I don't wait and go shower while sweating, I will not feel well.
I miss my great-grandma and her many weird and useful pieces of advice.
Aug. 14, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Today
It's finally a little cooler today.
There was a rainstorm in the afternoon, so it was non't as hot as yesterday when I jogged along the river near my apartment.
This is correct as it is. Using "wasn't" here will make the sentence seem less formal though.
But still, I wasI was still sweating when I got home.
Correct but this could sound more natural.
I'm a little tired now, so I'm going to shower and then go to bed.
Why didn't I shower immediately when I came back?
Because I was told when I was a kid that I should wait at least 30 minutes before showering if I was sweating.
It's a piece of weird advice from my great-grandma.
But the weirder thing is that if I don't wait and go shower while sweating, I will noon't feel well.
Again, this is correct but will sound less formal if written like this.
I miss my great-grandma and her many weird and useful pieces of advice.
Advice is an odd word that can't be plural. In English to refer to more than one "advice" we use phrases like "pieces of advice".
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Good work, this entry read very well 😊
Aug. 14, 2024
Thanks a lot!
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