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dunia

Nov. 6, 2019

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The news say raining season ends and dry season begins but today is raining a lot.
I don't want to go out I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.


Las noticias dicen que la temporada de lluvias termina y comienza la estación seca, pero hoy está lloviendo mucho.
No quiero salir me gustaría quedarme en casa y tomar chocolate caliente.

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Hot chocolate with marshmallows sounds amazing. Do you like to read when it's raining?

The news says the rainingy season has endsed and the dry season beginshas begun, but today ist will still raining a lot.

If you're writing this at the end of the day, maybe "but today it still rained a lot" is better.

I don't want to go out. I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate instead.

"instead" is optional. It makes the second sentence connect to the previous one better.

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saimdusan

Dec. 9, 2019

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Based on the Spanish text I think that the best option would be "but today it's still been raining a lot" or "today it's still been raining heavily", or even "today it's still raining (a lot)". My sense is that when dunia wrote this post it was still raining.

The news says the rainingy season ends and the dry season begins, but today it is raining a lot.

I don't want to go out, I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.

today


tToday

You should capitalize a title

The news say raining season ends and dry season begins but today is raining a lot.


The news says the rainingy season ends and the dry season begins, but today it is raining a lot.

The news says the rainingy season has endsed and the dry season beginshas begun, but today ist will still raining a lot.

If you're writing this at the end of the day, maybe "but today it still rained a lot" is better.

I don't want to go out I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.


I don't want to go out, I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.

I don't want to go out. I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate instead.

"instead" is optional. It makes the second sentence connect to the previous one better.

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