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10/25 To Write Whichever I Think Of|想到甚麼寫甚麼

I have been to before, after that I didn't go.| 我之前有去過,後來沒去了。

There are no any implications that you dislike sth.|沒有其他你不喜歡某個東西的感覺。

Would you roughly show us your web?|可以請你簡單說一下你的網站嗎?
(I mean "introduce". The one who created this web introduces to people what there are on the web. In my personal exprience, seeing that native speakers often use this words "show" to replace "introduce". But I am pretty sure if my guess is correct.)

Are there menbers on your website?|你的網站有人嗎?
(This is so rude, right? so don't be serious, I am not speaking in this way to people, not gonna lie. )

How many menbers are there on your website?|你的網站有多少人呢?
(That is my real intention, not the previous one.)

It can mean that you are not easily dissuaded from your goal.|這意思是你不會輕易的放棄你想做的。

Outlook on life|人生觀

One's view of life|某人的人生觀

Here is the waiting to correct sentences.|There is the original sentences.
這裡是等著別人過目的句子。 |而這裡是原文。

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10/25 To Write Whiching Whatever I Think Of|想到甚麼寫甚麼

I have been tohere before, after that I didn't gobut I haven't gone back since.| 我之前有去過,後來沒去了。

There are non't any implicatioother signs that you dison't like sth.omething|沒有其他你不喜歡某個東西的感覺。

WCould you roughly show us your website briefly?|可以請你簡單說一下你的網站嗎?

(I mean "introduce". The one who created thise website introduces it to people wthat there are on the web. In my personal experience, I seeing that native speakers often use thise words "show" to replace "introduce". But I am pretty sure ifthat my guess is correct. )

Are there menbany users on your website?|你的網站有人嗎?

(This is so rude, right? so dDon't betake it seriously, I am nodon't speaking in this way to people, not gonna lie. )

Depends; if you genuinely don't know, it wouldn't be rude.

How many menbusers are there onf your website?|你的網站有多少人呢?

(That is my real intention, not the previous one. )

It can means that you are not easily dissuaded from achieving your goals.|這意思是你不會輕易放棄你想做的。

Outlook on life|人生觀

One's view ofn life|某人的人生觀

Here isare the "waiting -to -be-corrected" sentences.|TAnd here isare the original sentences.

這裡是等著別人過目的句子。 |而這裡是原文。

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(I mean "introduce". The one who created thise website introduces it to people wthat there are on the web. In my personal experience, I seeing that native speakers often use thise words "show" to replace "introduce". But I am pretty sure ifthat my guess is correct. )

the one who created the website introduces it to people "that are on the web."
這裡要看成 people that are on the web. 對嗎? 那中文就是 在網路上的人。 如果我想說的是 :
There is a person who created this website here. A group of stranges and a host are here, too.
The host ask the creator "could you show us your website briefly to audience? "

是不是寫成 Could you show us your website briefly about what there are the content of the website?

還是....這裡不合適用show, 一樣只能用introduce your website to people呢? 因為我常看到的字是show, 而introduce比較常看到母語人士用在 自我介紹 or 把誰介紹給誰認識。 我還在觀察這兩個字要怎用。

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I have been tohere before, after that I didn't gobut I haven't gone back since.| 我之前有去過,後來沒去了。

I have been here before, but I haven't gone back since. 這兩邊時態居然是一樣的,本來想說這很難理解,可是看到 before 跟 since 就好像可以理解了。 之後都沒去了 對你們來說 也是 a period of time 所以寫成 have not gone back。
就很像是 I have not gone back since I went to there. 對嗎?

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Oct. 24, 2021

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1 Writing whatever I think of < 我超想學這句的,而且我一開始就是這樣寫,沒想到還真的跟原本想的一樣!

2 我發現 母語人士真的不常用 dislike 通常都用 don't 。 其實don't對我們來說就會很擔心會不會得罪人。 因為我們剛開始學到don't時,翻成中文的「不」,這個字很強調拒絕、負面等意思。 我想很難擺脫這種語感了,哈哈

3 How many users are there of your website? 居然是用of,我想到的是 在...裡面/上面 於是就寫成on。 I think I need more time to get used to this! lol

謝謝你 sivanc! Have a nice day : )

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Oct. 24, 2021

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the one who created the website introduces it to people "that are on the web." 這裡要看成 people that are on the web. 對嗎? 那中文就是 在網路上的人。 如果我想說的是 : There is a person who created this website here. A group of stranges and a host are here, too. The host ask the creator "could you show us your website briefly to audience? " 是不是寫成 Could you show us your website briefly about what there are the content of the website? 還是....這裡不合適用show, 一樣只能用introduce your website to people呢? 因為我常看到的字是show, 而introduce比較常看到母語人士用在 自我介紹 or 把誰介紹給誰認識。 我還在觀察這兩個字要怎用。

You could probably say "people online" more naturally. For your second question, I would rephrase as "could you give us a brief tour of the website?" "Introduce" is not really used here because that would more like, if the presenter were to talk about the concept of the website and what's on it, without showing it. The introduction is what comes before the actual demonstration.

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Oct. 24, 2021

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I have been here before, but I haven't gone back since. 這兩邊時態居然是一樣的,本來想說這很難理解,可是看到 before 跟 since 就好像可以理解了。 之後都沒去了 對你們來說 也是 a period of time 所以寫成 have not gone back。 就很像是 I have not gone back since I went to there. 對嗎?

Yeah, it's a shortened version of "I haven't gone back since (I went there the first time)," the listener can infer that from the previous clause.

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Oct. 24, 2021

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1 Writing whatever I think of < 我超想學這句的,而且我一開始就是這樣寫,沒想到還真的跟原本想的一樣! 2 我發現 母語人士真的不常用 dislike 通常都用 don't 。 其實don't對我們來說就會很擔心會不會得罪人。 因為我們剛開始學到don't時,翻成中文的「不」,這個字很強調拒絕、負面等意思。 我想很難擺脫這種語感了,哈哈 3 How many users are there of your website? 居然是用of,我想到的是 在...裡面/上面 於是就寫成on。 I think I need more time to get used to this! lol 謝謝你 sivanc! Have a nice day : )

If you wanted to be more natural, you could say "writing whatever comes to mind" or "writing whatever pops into my head." As far as dislike vs. don't, that was just because I rewrote your sentence entirely and that was just what came to mind. You can use either, maybe "don't" is a little more casual. With "of" vs. "on," prepositions are tricky, that one wasn't such a big deal either way. However, a similar situation is "what is your opinion of/on/about...?" and, there, "of" and "on/about" have quite different meanings.

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Oct. 24, 2021

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You could probably say "people online" more naturally. For your second question, I would rephrase as "could you give us a brief tour of the website?" "Introduce" is not really used here because that would more like, if the presenter were to talk about the concept of the website and what's on it, without showing it. The introduction is what comes before the actual demonstration.

我好像理解了! 這時候要加入tour。 這個字常看成是演唱會,某某歌手tour, 所以只會想到歌手在大家面前唱歌,哈哈

確實tour就是有 親自在別人面前做什麼事的概念,對嗎?
Doing or speaking sth to people in personal. This is one of the concepts of this word "tour".

As for People online
你是說可以寫成 how many people online of your website? 這個意思嗎?

To Write Whichever I Think Of|想到甚麼寫甚麼


I have been to before, after that I didn't go.| 我之前有去過,後來沒去了。


I have been tohere before, after that I didn't gobut I haven't gone back since.| 我之前有去過,後來沒去了。

There are no any implications that you dislike sth.|沒有其他你不喜歡某個東西的感覺。


There are non't any implicatioother signs that you dison't like sth.omething|沒有其他你不喜歡某個東西的感覺。

Would you roughly show us your web?|可以請你簡單說一下你的網站嗎?


WCould you roughly show us your website briefly?|可以請你簡單說一下你的網站嗎?

(I mean "introduce". The one who created this web introduces to people what there are on the web. In my personal exprience, seeing that native speakers often use this words "show" to replace "introduce". But I am pretty sure if my guess is correct. )


(I mean "introduce". The one who created thise website introduces it to people wthat there are on the web. In my personal experience, I seeing that native speakers often use thise words "show" to replace "introduce". But I am pretty sure ifthat my guess is correct. )

Are there menbers on your website?|你的網站有人嗎?


Are there menbany users on your website?|你的網站有人嗎?

(This is so rude, right? so don't be serious, I am not speaking in this way to people, not gonna lie. )


(This is so rude, right? so dDon't betake it seriously, I am nodon't speaking in this way to people, not gonna lie. )

Depends; if you genuinely don't know, it wouldn't be rude.

How many menbers are there on your website?|你的網站有多少人呢?


How many menbusers are there onf your website?|你的網站有多少人呢?

(That is my real intention, not the previous one. )


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It can mean that you are not easily dissuaded from your goal.|這意思是你不會輕易的放棄你想做的。


It can means that you are not easily dissuaded from achieving your goals.|這意思是你不會輕易放棄你想做的。

Outlook on life|人生觀


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One's view of life|某人的人生觀


One's view ofn life|某人的人生觀

Here is the waiting to correct sentences.|There is the original sentences.


Here isare the "waiting -to -be-corrected" sentences.|TAnd here isare the original sentences.

這裡是等著別人過目的句子。 |而這裡是原文。


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