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akihello

Aug. 17, 2020

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To seek any journals that have many corrections.

About to seek journals written by my target language learners, to read and learn:
I wonder if I could find journals in English that had corrected a lot.
The recent post isn't enough to learn since they have corrections barely, I feel.

I also want to find journals having many likes.


『たくさんの添削がついた記事を探すことについて』

同じ言語を勉強している他の人の日記について:
 たくさんの添削がついている文を検索できるようにはならないでしょうか。
 最近投稿されたばかりの文では、「添削が少なくてあまり参考にならないなぁ…」と感じることがあるからです。

また、コメントがたくさんついた記事というのにも興味があります。

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To seekSeeking any journals that have many corrections.

About toOn the topic of seeking journals written by others learning my target language learners,in order to read and learn from them:

I wonder if I couldan find journals in English that hadve been corrected a lot.

The recent post isn'tI feel that the posts recently haven't been enough to learn from since they barely have any corrections barely, I feel.

I also want to find journals havingthat have many likes.

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Your English is getting there! Keep it up!

To seek any journals withat have many corrections.

About to seeking journals that are written by my target language learners, tofor reading and learning:

I wonder if I could find journals in English that had corrected a lota lot of corrections.

The recent post isn't enough to learn since theI feel like they barely have any corrections barely, I feel.

I also want to find journals havingthat have many likes.

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akihello

Aug. 17, 2020

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Thanks for your correction. 添削ありがとう〜

To seek anySeeking journals withat have many corrections.

About to seeking journals written by learners of my target language learners, to read and learn:.

I wonder if I couldan find journals in English that had correctve received a lots of corrections.

The recent post isI feel that, recently, the posts aren't enough to learn with since they have corrections barely, I feelbarely have any corrections.

I wasn't sure about plurality here, so the other option is to keep 'post' singular, which yields: 'I feel that the recent post isn't enough to learn with since IT barely haS any corrections' Sorry for the all caps, they're for emphasis.

I also want to find journals havingwith many likes.

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'with' is like a shorter way of saying 'that have'. It doesn't work all the time, though.

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Nightcap

Aug. 17, 2020

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or 'having'

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akihello

Aug. 17, 2020

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The recent post isI feel that, recently, the posts aren't enough to learn with since they have corrections barely, I feelbarely have any corrections.

I confused about the expressions between "the recent post" and "the recent posts".


With the word, I wanted to say like:

young posts could only have few of corrections, and it's not enough to learn.

* young posts == it's just a short time after the posts are made.

To seek any journals that have many corrections.


To seek anySeeking journals withat have many corrections.

To seek any journals withat have many corrections.

To seekSeeking any journals that have many corrections.

About to seek journals written by my target language learners, to read and learn:


About to seeking journals written by learners of my target language learners, to read and learn:.

About to seeking journals that are written by my target language learners, tofor reading and learning:

About toOn the topic of seeking journals written by others learning my target language learners,in order to read and learn from them:

I wonder if I could find journals in English that had corrected a lot.


I wonder if I couldan find journals in English that had correctve received a lots of corrections.

I wonder if I could find journals in English that had corrected a lota lot of corrections.

I wonder if I couldan find journals in English that hadve been corrected a lot.

The recent post isn't enough to learn since they have corrections barely, I feel.


The recent post isI feel that, recently, the posts aren't enough to learn with since they have corrections barely, I feelbarely have any corrections.

I wasn't sure about plurality here, so the other option is to keep 'post' singular, which yields: 'I feel that the recent post isn't enough to learn with since IT barely haS any corrections' Sorry for the all caps, they're for emphasis.

The recent post isn't enough to learn since theI feel like they barely have any corrections barely, I feel.

The recent post isn'tI feel that the posts recently haven't been enough to learn from since they barely have any corrections barely, I feel.

I also want to find journals having many likes.


I also want to find journals havingwith many likes.

I also want to find journals havingthat have many likes.

I also want to find journals havingthat have many likes.

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