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Tammy

Feb. 16, 2024

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To See an Exhibition

Tomorrow is our last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday. I'm going to visit an exhibition with my friend.

It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subway to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour to the exhibition.

Yes, it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.

It's a long time. I will bring a book.


看展去

明天是春节假期的最后一天。我计划跟一个朋友一起去看展。

展览在杭州,所以我得早起,坐一小时地铁到高铁站,然后坐一小时火车,然后再花一小时到展览地点。

是的,明儿我得花6个小时在往返的路上。

时间可长了,我得带本书在身上。

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To SeeGoing To an Exhibition

Tomorrow is ourthe last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday.

I'm going to visit an exhibition with my friend.

It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subwayride the subway for an hour to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour getting to the exhibition.

Yes, it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.

It's will be a long time, so I will bring a book.

I will bring a book.

Combined with the previous sentence.

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I hope you enjoyed the exhibition.

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Tammy

March 17, 2024

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Thank you!

Yes, I enjoyed it a lot.

It's in the city of Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subwaythe subway for an hour to the high-speed train station, and then spend another hour on the train, and then travel for another hour to the exhibition.

Yes, tomorrow it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.

It's a long time. to travel.

Feedback

Very good!

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Tammy

Feb. 19, 2024

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Thank you!

To See an Exhibition

Tomorrow is ourthe last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday.

Your original wording isn’t wrong, but “the” is more natural than “our.”

I'm going to visit an exhibition with my friend.

It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and takride an hour by subway to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour to get to the exhibition.

Yes, it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.

It's a long time.

I will bring a book.

Feedback

Nicely written.

What’s the topic of the exhibition?

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Tammy

Feb. 19, 2024

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Thank you!

It's a retrospective exhibition of Zao Wou-Ki, a Chinese-French painter known for his remarkable fusion of Eastern and Western artistic traditions.

I love the colors in his paintings!

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Tammy

Feb. 22, 2024

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I took some pictures at the Exhibition. You can see the colors here if you want to: https://twitter.com/myplain_/status/1760514143965319635

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JoeTofu

Feb. 22, 2024

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Amazing! Thanks for sharing those.

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Tammy

Feb. 23, 2024

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You're welcome.

It's a long time.

Though this is fine, you could write "It will be a long time" since it will take place in the future

I will bring a book.

from my above feedback you could just continue the sentence and say "... so i will bring a book."

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Tammy

Feb. 19, 2024

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Thank you for your advice!

To See an Exhibition


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To SeeGoing To an Exhibition

Tomorrow is our last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday.


Tomorrow is ourthe last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday.

Your original wording isn’t wrong, but “the” is more natural than “our.”

Tomorrow is ourthe last day of the Chinese New Year Holiday.

I'm going to visit an exhibition with my friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subway to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour to the exhibition.


It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and takride an hour by subway to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour to get to the exhibition.

It's in the city of Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subwaythe subway for an hour to the high-speed train station, and then spend another hour on the train, and then travel for another hour to the exhibition.

It's in Hangzhou City, so I need to get up early tomorrow morning and take an hour by subwayride the subway for an hour to the high-speed train station, then spend another hour on the train, and then another hour getting to the exhibition.

Yes, it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, tomorrow it will take me six hours to travel there and back tomorrow.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a long time.


It's a long time.

Though this is fine, you could write "It will be a long time" since it will take place in the future

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a long time. to travel.

It's will be a long time, so I will bring a book.

I will bring a book.


I will bring a book.

from my above feedback you could just continue the sentence and say "... so i will bring a book."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will bring a book.

Combined with the previous sentence.

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