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hebereke

July 22, 2020

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To see a doctor

To see a doctor is to get a chance to live longer and healthier. To be a “good patient” is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunity. A good patient is a person who tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that to the doctor. Then you can get a appropriate remedy and it is for your own sake.


医者にかかるというのは「より健康に長生きするチャンスをつかむ」ということだ。そのためにも,こちらが「よい患者」にならなくてはならない。よい患者とは自分自身が意欲を持って「治ろう」と本気で取り組む人のことだ。まず,自分の状態をきちんと把握し,医者に病状を理解してもらうことが大切だ。そうすれば,適確な治療が受けられる。ひいては自分のためなのだ。

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To seeSeeing a doctor

To seeSeeing a doctor is to get aaking your chance to live longer and healthier.

To beBeing a “good patient” is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunityan opportunity one has to seize.

A good patient is a person who tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that to the doctorit's particularly important to check how your (health) condition is evolving to keep the doctor informed about it.

Then you can get an appropriate remedy, and it is for your own sake.

I'd emphasize the condition here: "ONLY then you can get..."

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hebereke

July 23, 2020

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thank you!

To see a doctor

To see a doctor is to get a chance to live longer and healthier.

Thus, the chance to be a “good patient" is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunityan opportunity that has to be seized.

A good patient is a person who seriously tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that toing the changes in your health and telling the doctor about it.

Then you can get an appropriate remedy, and it ithat's for your own sake.

"And it is" is grammatically correct, but it doesn't sound right as part of the same sentence. It would be fine if you put it in a separate sentence though.

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hebereke

July 23, 2020

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thank you!!

To see a doctor


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To seeSeeing a doctor

To see a doctor is to get a chance to live longer and healthier.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To seeSeeing a doctor is to get aaking your chance to live longer and healthier.

To be a “good patient” is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunity.


Thus, the chance to be a “good patient" is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunityan opportunity that has to be seized.

To beBeing a “good patient” is one thing that is needed to seize the opportunityan opportunity one has to seize.

A good patient is a person who tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that to the doctor.


A good patient is a person who seriously tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that toing the changes in your health and telling the doctor about it.

A good patient is a person who tries to recover seriously, and what is important is to know what has become of you and to tell that to the doctorit's particularly important to check how your (health) condition is evolving to keep the doctor informed about it.

Then you can get a appropriate remedy and it is for your own sake.


Then you can get an appropriate remedy, and it ithat's for your own sake.

"And it is" is grammatically correct, but it doesn't sound right as part of the same sentence. It would be fine if you put it in a separate sentence though.

Then you can get an appropriate remedy, and it is for your own sake.

I'd emphasize the condition here: "ONLY then you can get..."

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