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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!
I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!
I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)
I hope you can spend great time in holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!
You don’t need to reply :)
Take care.

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To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)

I hope you can spend great time inhave a happy holidays, and have a safe trip to Korea!

You don’t need to reply :)

Take care.

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megu

Jan. 18, 2023

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Thank you so much!

To my teacher,

Thank you for yesterday!

I actually do wannat to go to Canada again andso I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!

"Wanna" is okay for speaking and writing fiction.

すごいですね。

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

You don’t need to reply. :)

Take care.

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いいメッセージです。上手に書けています!

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megu

Jan. 18, 2023

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ありがとうございます!
I’m happy to hear that!

To my teacher

Thank you for yesterday!

I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver, thanks to you!

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

I hope you can spendhave a great time induring the holidays and (have) a safe trip to Korea!

You could omit the second “have”.

You don’t need to reply. :)

Take care.

Feedback

Well done.

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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you so much!

I hope you can spendhave a great time during holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!

This way sounds a lot more natural

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megu

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you so much!

To my teacher


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To my teacher,

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Thank you for yesterday!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!


I actually do wanna go to Canada again and I’m interested in Vancouver, thanks to you!

I actually do wannat to go to Canada again andso I’m interested in Vancouver thanks to you!

"Wanna" is okay for speaking and writing fiction. すごいですね。

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people :)


I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

I realized Canada has so many attractive places and people. :)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope you can spend great time in holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!


I hope you can spendhave a great time during holidays and have a safe trip to Korea!

This way sounds a lot more natural

I hope you can spendhave a great time induring the holidays and (have) a safe trip to Korea!

You could omit the second “have”.

I hope you can spend great time inhave a happy holidays, and have a safe trip to Korea!

You don’t need to reply :)


You don’t need to reply. :)

You don’t need to reply. :)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Take care.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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