May 28, 2020
To Lose Weight
I decided to lose my weight and started a low-carbohydrate diet from today.
I really love a food that has a sweat taste like chocolate or fruits, and I can't even drink a cup of coffee without sugar. However, I heard that a low-carbohydrate diet is good for losing weight. It is only limiting foods little bit, and you can eat meat or fish without limiting. So, I will eat less chocolate and do a workout for 10 to 20 minutes everyday.
I decided to lose my weight and started on a low-carbohydrate diet from today.
I really love a food that has a sweat tasteis sweet like chocolate or fruits, and I can't even drink a cup of coffee without sugar.
It is only limiting my foods choices a little bit, and youI can eat meat or fish without limitingmuch restriction.
So, I will eat less chocolate and do a work out for 10 to 20 minutes everyday.
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I enjoyed your journal entry. All the best! I hope you'll achieve your goal!
June 4, 2020
Thank you! I will do my best to achieve my goal ^^
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I decided to lose my weight and started a low-carbohydrate diet from today.
I really love a food that has a sweat tastesweet-tasting foods like chocolate orand fruits, and I can't even drink a cup of coffee without sugar.
However, I heard that a low-carbohydrate diet is good for losing weight.
It is only limitings the foods you can eat a little bit, and you can eat as much meat orand fish without limitingas you want.
So, I will eat less chocolate and do a work out for 10 to 20 minutes every day.
June 4, 2020
Thank you!!
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To Lose Weight
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