June 28, 2021
To 15-year old myself
To 15-year old myself
Hi. How are you doing now? This letter is written by "you" from about 5 years later. Perhaps it makes you surprised, but please calm down and read it, don't throw it away!
I wonder I could enjoy everything at the age of 15. You have passed the high school examinations. The classroom you belong to is full of funny but nice guys and you made some good friends isn't it? Well, it must be correct because I feel so in the future.
Today I write this letter because I have one thing to tell you.
Remember, when you meet what you want to do, dedicate your time as much as possible and do your best. Because it is no exaggeration that everything I experienced when I was 15 years old had grown up me.
What you will enjoy, regret and overcome must make you strong mentally and give you some hints about your future life.
Good luck, and I hope you will be nicer than what I am now after about 5 years later.
Sincely,
From future me
To 15-year old myself
To 15-year old myself
Hi.
How are you doing now?
This letter is written by "you" from about 5 years later.
Perhaps it makes you surpriseds you, but please calm down and read it, don't throw it away!
I wonder how I could enjoy everything at the age of 15.
You have passed theyour high school examinations.
The classroom you belong to is full of funny butand nice guys and you made some good friends isn't ihaven’t?
Well, ithis must be correct because I feel so in the future.
Today I am writeing this letter because I have one thing to tell you.
Remember, when you meetdecide what you want to do, dedicate your timetime to it as much as possible and do your best.
Because it is no exaggeration that everything I experienced when I was 15 years old hmade me grown up me.
What you will enjoy, regret and overcome must make you strong mentally and give you some hints about your future life.
Good luck, and I hope you will be nicer than what I am now after about 5 years later.
Sincerely,
From future me
To 15-year old myself
Another way for the title: "To my 15-year-old self"
To 15-year old myself
See comment for title.
Hi.
Often written with an exclamation mark: Hi!
How are you doing now?
This letter is written by "you" from about 5 years later.
Perhaps it makes youyou are surprised, but please calm down and read it, d. Don't throw it away!
I wonder how I could enjoy everything at the age of 15.
Difficult to know what verb tense should be used here. I think many writers could have difficulty with this, including me!
You have passed the high school examinations.
The classroom you belong to is full of funny but nice guys and you have made some good friends isn't it?.
"have made" is probably a bit better, especially because you have already said, " ...The classroom you belong to is ..." The "is" is used to express a state in the present time. " ... have made" is more present than just "made".
The "isn't it?" doesn't seem to help with the understanding of the sentence. If you ant to finish with a question at the end, first of all try to make clear in your own mind exactly what it is you want to say. Sorry if this sounds a bit vague!
Well, ithis must be correct because Iit feel sos that way now in the future.
Again, the subject of the writing, time past and present, makes it difficult to know how to express verb tense properly here!
Today I write this letter because I have one thing to tell you.
Remember, when you meefind out what you want to do, dedicate your time as much as possible to this and do your best.
Because it is no exaggeration that everything I experienced when I was 15 years old hadelped me t grown up me.
What you will enjoy, regret and overcome must make you strong mentally and give you some hints about your future life.
Good luck, and I hope you will be nicer than what I am now after about 5 years later.
Sincerely,
From future me
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I enjoyed this story!
The present time relating to future time makes it a bit difficult to know how to use verb tense here so that you can properly express what it is you want to say. I think even many native English speakers would have difficulty with this!
I hope I have been of some help to you. I hope others will also help you with this writing, so that you get a range of opinions.
Let me know if I can help you further with anything here.
Good progress.
Keep going!
mjm
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What you will enjoy, regret and overcome must make you strong mentally and give you some hints about your future life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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