Topic: The chart below (see the attachment) shows the number of trips made by children to and from school in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Topic: The chart below (see the attachment) shows the number of trips made by children to and from school in one country in 1990 and 2010 using different modes of transport.

The bar chart illustrates five means of transportation by which young children choose to commuted between home and school fromin 1990 toand 2010, namely: walking, cycling, by car, by bus or even a combine with taking theation of bus and walking. The bar chart illustrates five means of transportation by which young children commuted between home and school in 1990 and 2010: walking, cycling, car, bus or a combination of bus and walking.

The data come from two years only, 1990 and 2010, instead of a span of years from 1990 to 2010.

In 1990, approximately twice as muchany as other approac others, over 12 million of the young students walked to school. In 1990, approximately twice as many as the others, over 12 million young students walked to school.

However, tTraveling to and from school on foot, however, became less popular in 2010, which went downen it decreased by 50 percent. Traveling to and from school on foot, however, became less popular in 2010 when it decreased by 50 percent.

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It was gGoing to school by car which took the largest proportion, withincreased the most by over 2.5 times of increase. Going to school by car increased the most by over 2.5 times.

The overall trend of ways to school from 1990 to 2010transportation went down noticeably, except for car passenger, which was the only increasing one car whose use was the only one which increased. The overall trend of transportation went down noticeably, except for passenger car whose use was the only one which increased.

Back toIn 1990, riding a bike, taking a bus or go witha combination of taking a bus and walk haing totaled about 6 million trips per year. In 1990, riding a bike, taking a bus or a combination of taking a bus and walking totaled about 6 million trips per year.

Twenty years later, the number ofs for these three choicmodes changed, with 2 million of pupils cycling, 3 millions of young children walking and taking thea bus, and 5 million times of taking a bus soloonly. Twenty years later, the numbers for these three modes changed with 2 million pupils cycling, 3 million walking and taking a bus, and 5 million taking a bus only.