March 4, 2022
Tired Today
It was quite hard at work, today.
I had a lot of things to negotiate between teams, and I had to solve many issues.
As a result my health became bad and I am too tired.
In this case, I've got to sleep well to get healthier.
If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying.
That's something I don't want.
Tired Today
It was quite hard at work, today.
I had a lot of things to negotiate between teams, and I had to solve many issues.
As a result, my health became baddeteriorated, and I am tooextremely tired.
In this caseBecause of this, I've got to sleep well to get healthier.
If not, I will be burnt out, and everythingI will be annoyed by everything.
That's something I don't want.
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Overall, your sentences are good but I just corrected them to sound more natural. Great work! :)
March 5, 2022
Thank you very much :)
Tired Today
Correct but you could also say "A tiring day"
It was quite harddifficult at work, today.
I had a lot of things to negotiate between teams, and I had to solve many issues.
As a result, my health became badis getting worse and I am too tired.
In this caseSo, I've got to sleep well to get healthier.
"In this case" is still correct but a bit formal
If not, I will beget burnted out, and everythingit will be annoying.
It might but better to use a different word that isn't "annoying"
That's something I don't want.
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Very good writing, get well soon :)
March 5, 2022
Thank you for your kindness.
As a result my health became bad and I am too tired.
This is fine, but you may prefer to say, "As a result, I feel weak and I am very tired."
In this case, I've got to sleep well to get healthier.
More naturally, "That's why I've got to sleep well to get healthier."
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I wish you recover your health as soon as possible. 👍
March 5, 2022
Thank you so much. I hope so.
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Tired Today Tired Today Correct but you could also say "A tiring day" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was quite hard at work, today. It was quite It was quite hard at work |
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I had a lot of things to negotiate between teams, and I had to solve many issues. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As a result my health became bad and I am too tired. As a result my health became bad and I am too tired. This is fine, but you may prefer to say, "As a result, I feel weak and I am very tired." As a result, my health As a result, my health |
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In this case, I've got to sleep well to get healthier. In this case, I've got to sleep well to get healthier. More naturally, "That's why I've got to sleep well to get healthier."
"In this case" is still correct but a bit formal
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If not, I will be burnt out, and everything will be annoying. If not, I will It might but better to use a different word that isn't "annoying" If not, I will be burnt out, and |
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That's something I don't want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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