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kiwy

Sept. 29, 2021

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Tired

I was having a lang and boring dream, then I suddenly woke up. It was seven a.m, I was told we would start to the business trip at ten to eight. I got up quickly. When I finished all the routine, the director was ten minutes late.
The road to our destination was rebuilding so it became on way only for many parts of it. We have to wait for a few times. The distance was about 30 km, usually it just takes us 40 minutes to there, but we spent 75 munites today. Every time when the car stopped, I felt like puking.
We arrived so early. When I was eating bread, the headmaster put her hand on my shoulder and invited me to visit the campus. It was sunny and hot, I had to use my umbrella to prevent us from the sunlight. The school was much bigger than mine, and its was triple of mine. But its canteen was as big as mine, so the students had to eat in batches. To keep the peace, the teachers and security guards need to work in extra time. So the teachers there were much busier than my school.
At 10:15, the class began. The teacher was a little nervous, and she made a small mistake. Regardless, she did quite well, so did the students. However, It seemed more like a show. My director said that there was a budget of the public teaching lesson, someone had to take in charge of the program. (I think it is quite hard for foreigners to understand this. But I don't dare to explain it. Sorry.)
Then, there was a subject seminar. I thought we were all wasting our time, because what we were talking about was bullshit. It was bereaucratism, but I had to stand it. I was starving and wanted to go to the toilet. Nevertheless, bad things never come alone. After the bullshit talk, there was another meeting at 12:00. I couldn't stand anymore, so I ate a little bread quietly. I knew it was embarrassed, but I thought getting stomache was worse. I chatted with the teacher next me. We were in the same age. She had changed a few jobs and determined to be a teacher last year. She asked me why I didn't take the exam to be a national teacher which was more stable than any other jobs. I told her that I wanted to go on studying.
Nearly at 1 p.m, we finally had lunch. We finished quickly and went back to school in a hurry. Unfortunately, we also spent a long time on the way, which made me feel like puking again. When I was back, I felt exhausted. But I want to have the class because the teaching progress of my class was slower than Class 4. However, I felt very sick when I was teaching. My eyes drowned in tears unconsciously for a few times, and what worse was I couldn't stop it. The class was very quiet today, but they didn't ask anything. Things like these never happened before. Even when I finished the class and sat in office, it continued.
I spent about 160 minutes on the way, 160 minutes on the meetings, 45 minutes on the class. And I didn't sleep at noon as I usually did. It was really a bad day. I hate having any meetings. But I can't escape any of them now. I hope I can soon.

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Tired

I was having a laong and boring dream, and then I suddenly woke up.

It was seven a.m, I was told we would start tomeet to go on the business trip at ten to eight.

I got up quickly.

When I finished all themy routines, the director was ten minutes late.

The road to our destination was rebuildingunder construction, so it becamewas on e-way only for many parts of it.

We haved to wait for a few times.

The distance was about 30 km, which usually it just takes us 40 minutes to there, but we spent, but it took us 75 muniinutes today because of all the construction.

Every time when the car stopped, I felt like puking.

We arrived so early.

WhenAs I was eating breadkfast, the headmaster put her hand on my shoulder and invited me to visittour the campus.

It was sunny and hot, I had to use my umbrella to prevent us from the sunlightgive us some shade.

The school was much bigger than mine, and its wasperhaps even triple of minthe size.

But iIts canteen was, however, was still just as big as mine, so the students had to eat in batches.

To keep the peace, the teachers and security guards needed to work in extra overtime.

So the teachers there were much busier than at my school.

At 10:15, the class began.

The teacher was a little nervous, and she made a small mistake.

Regardless, she did quite well, and so did the students.

However, It seemedfelt more like a show than an actual class.

My director said that there was a budget of thefor public teaching lessons, and that someone had to take in chargeover leadership of the program.

I won't pester you for too many answers, then.

(I think it is quite hard for foreigners to understand this. B, but I don't dare to explain it. Sorry. )

ThenNext, there was a subject seminar.

I thought we were all wasting our time, because what we were talking about was all bullshit.

It was beureaucratismcy, but I had to standit through it.

I was starving and wantneeded to go to the toiletbathroom.

Nevertheless, bad things never come alone.

Can't really think of an equivalent English phrase at the moment.

After the bullshit talk, there was another meeting at 12:00.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I ate a little bread quietly.

I knew it was embarrasseding, but I thought getting a stomachache was worse.

I chatted with the teacher next me.

We were in the same age.

She had changed jobs a few jobs and determintimes, and had only decided to become a teacher last year.

She asked me why I didn't take the exam to be a national teacher which wasteacher at a public school, as those jobs were more stable than any other jobs.

I assume national teacher = your salary is paid by the state.

I told her that I wanted to go on studying.

NAt nearly at 1 p.m, we finally had lunch.

We finished quickly and went back to our school in a hurry.

Unfortunately, we also spent a long time on the waybus, which made me feel like puking again.

When I wasgot back, I felt exhausted.

But II still wanted to have the class though, because the teaching progress of the students in my class was slower than that of Class 4's.

However, I felt very sick when I was teaching.

My eyes drowned in tears unconsciously for a few timesI teared up a few times without noticing, and what's worse was that I couldn't stop it.

The class was very quiet today, butand they didn't ask anything questions.

Things like theses kind of stuff had never happened before.

Even when I finished the class and sat in office, itmy nausea continued.

I spent about 160 minutes on the way, 160 minutes on the meetings, 45 minutes on the classnearly three hours each way to the other school, and 45 minutes teaching.

And I didn't sleep at noon as I usually dido.

Connect to previous sentence.

It was really was a bad day.

I hate having any meetings.

But I can't escape any of them now.

I hope I can soon.

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Nice writing! Sounds like a tiring day! Especially if you're used to an afternoon nap. At least your student didn't act up on top of it all.

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kiwy

Sept. 30, 2021

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She asked me why I didn't take the exam to be a national teacher which wasteacher at a public school, as those jobs were more stable than any other jobs.

I am not sure. While my salary is muuuuch lower than the publics, and I don't have any welfare as they do.

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kiwy

Sept. 30, 2021

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Yes, I think they become a little kinder.

Tired


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I was having a lang and boring dream, then I suddenly woke up.


I was having a laong and boring dream, and then I suddenly woke up.

It was seven a.m, I was told we would start to the business trip at ten to eight.


It was seven a.m, I was told we would start tomeet to go on the business trip at ten to eight.

I got up quickly.


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When I finished all the routine, the director was ten minutes late.


When I finished all themy routines, the director was ten minutes late.

The road to our destination was rebuilding so it became on way only for many parts of it.


The road to our destination was rebuildingunder construction, so it becamewas on e-way only for many parts of it.

We have to wait for a few times.


We haved to wait for a few times.

The distance was about 30 km, usually it just takes us 40 minutes to there, but we spent 75 munites today.


The distance was about 30 km, which usually it just takes us 40 minutes to there, but we spent, but it took us 75 muniinutes today because of all the construction.

Every time when the car stopped, I felt like puking.


Every time when the car stopped, I felt like puking.

We arrived so early.


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When I was eating bread, the headmaster put her hand on my shoulder and invited me to visit the campus.


WhenAs I was eating breadkfast, the headmaster put her hand on my shoulder and invited me to visittour the campus.

It was sunny and hot, I had to use my umbrella to prevent us from the sunlight.


It was sunny and hot, I had to use my umbrella to prevent us from the sunlightgive us some shade.

The school was much bigger than mine, and its was triple of mine.


The school was much bigger than mine, and its wasperhaps even triple of minthe size.

But its canteen was as big as mine, so the students had to eat in batches.


But iIts canteen was, however, was still just as big as mine, so the students had to eat in batches.

To keep the peace, the teachers and security guards need to work in extra time.


To keep the peace, the teachers and security guards needed to work in extra overtime.

So the teachers there were much busier than my school.


So the teachers there were much busier than at my school.

At 10:15, the class began.


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The teacher was a little nervous, and she made a small mistake.


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Regardless, she did quite well, so did the students.


Regardless, she did quite well, and so did the students.

However, It seemed more like a show.


However, It seemedfelt more like a show than an actual class.

My director said that there was a budget of the public teaching lesson, someone had to take in charge of the program.


My director said that there was a budget of thefor public teaching lessons, and that someone had to take in chargeover leadership of the program.

I won't pester you for too many answers, then.

(I think it is quite hard for foreigners to understand this. But I don't dare to explain it. Sorry. )


(I think it is quite hard for foreigners to understand this. B, but I don't dare to explain it. Sorry. )

Then, there was a subject seminar.


ThenNext, there was a subject seminar.

I thought we were all wasting our time, because what we were talking about was bullshit.


I thought we were all wasting our time, because what we were talking about was all bullshit.

It was bereaucratism, but I had to stand it.


It was beureaucratismcy, but I had to standit through it.

I was starving and wanted to go to the toilet.


I was starving and wantneeded to go to the toiletbathroom.

Nevertheless, bad things never come alone.


Nevertheless, bad things never come alone.

Can't really think of an equivalent English phrase at the moment.

After the bullshit talk, there was another meeting at 12:00.


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I couldn't stand anymore, so I ate a little bread quietly.


I couldn't stand it anymore, so I ate a little bread quietly.

I knew it was embarrassed, but I thought getting stomache was worse.


I knew it was embarrasseding, but I thought getting a stomachache was worse.

I chatted with the teacher next me.


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We were in the same age.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She had changed a few jobs and determined to be a teacher last year.


She had changed jobs a few jobs and determintimes, and had only decided to become a teacher last year.

She asked me why I didn't take the exam to be a national teacher which was more stable than any other jobs.


She asked me why I didn't take the exam to be a national teacher which wasteacher at a public school, as those jobs were more stable than any other jobs.

I assume national teacher = your salary is paid by the state.

I told her that I wanted to go on studying.


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Nearly at 1 p.m, we finally had lunch.


NAt nearly at 1 p.m, we finally had lunch.

We finished quickly and went back to school in a hurry.


We finished quickly and went back to our school in a hurry.

Unfortunately, we also spent a long time on the way, which made me feel like puking again.


Unfortunately, we also spent a long time on the waybus, which made me feel like puking again.

When I was back, I felt exhausted.


When I wasgot back, I felt exhausted.

But I want to have the class because the teaching progress of my class was slower than Class 4.


But II still wanted to have the class though, because the teaching progress of the students in my class was slower than that of Class 4's.

However, I felt very sick when I was teaching.


However, I felt very sick when I was teaching.

My eyes drowned in tears unconsciously for a few times, and what worse was I couldn't stop it.


My eyes drowned in tears unconsciously for a few timesI teared up a few times without noticing, and what's worse was that I couldn't stop it.

The class was very quiet today, but they didn't ask anything.


The class was very quiet today, butand they didn't ask anything questions.

Things like these never happened before.


Things like theses kind of stuff had never happened before.

Even when I finished the class and sat in office, it continued.


Even when I finished the class and sat in office, itmy nausea continued.

I spent about 160 minutes on the way, 160 minutes on the meetings, 45 minutes on the class.


I spent about 160 minutes on the way, 160 minutes on the meetings, 45 minutes on the classnearly three hours each way to the other school, and 45 minutes teaching.

And I didn't sleep at noon as I usually did.


And I didn't sleep at noon as I usually dido.

Connect to previous sentence.

It was really a bad day.


It was really was a bad day.

I hate having any meetings.


I hate having any meetings.

But I can't escape any of them now.


But I can't escape any of them now.

I hope I can soon.


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