Sept. 8, 2021
I am so tired now, even if it is 8 p.m, I've taken a shower and wanna go to bed.
I am also tired of my job now.
Tired
I am so tired now, even ifthough it is 8 p.m,PM. I've taken a shower and I wanna go to bed.
I am also tired of my job now.
Tired
I am so tired now, even ifthough it is only 8 p.m,. I've taken a shower and wannat to go to bed.
This is a run-on sentence. Another way you could fix it is by putting "even though it is only 8 p.m. onto the second sentence:
"I am so tired now. Even though it is only 8 p.m., I've taken a shower and want to go to bed." Which way communicates what you want to say? Do you want to say that you are surprisingly tired for bed for 8 p.m.? Or do you want to say that you've already prepared for bed by taking a shower, which you normally don't do by 8 p.m.?
Also, "wanna" is acceptable in spoken English and with text messaging or email, but with most written English you should say "want to"
I am also tired of my job now.
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Nice job! I hope you get a good night's sleep and have a better day tomorrow!
I am so tired now, even ifthough it is 8 p.m, I've taken a shower and wanna go to bed.
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This is really good
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I am so tired now, even if it is 8 p.m, I've taken a shower and wanna go to bed. I am so tired now, even I am so tired now, even This is a run-on sentence. Another way you could fix it is by putting "even though it is only 8 p.m. onto the second sentence: "I am so tired now. Even though it is only 8 p.m., I've taken a shower and want to go to bed." Which way communicates what you want to say? Do you want to say that you are surprisingly tired for bed for 8 p.m.? Or do you want to say that you've already prepared for bed by taking a shower, which you normally don't do by 8 p.m.? Also, "wanna" is acceptable in spoken English and with text messaging or email, but with most written English you should say "want to" I am so tired now, even |
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