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sachisachi

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Tiramisu Burger (100)

I had an tiramisu burger at a cafe.

It was a sandwich with buns and the filling was tiramisu which is Italian dessert.

I've never seen a dessert like that, so I found it interesting.

However, I already had pasta, so I decided to share it with my friend.

I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.

I tried cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess.

Maybe you can imagine the situation.

It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuck out.

However it tasted really good even though it looked ugly.


カフェでティラミスバーガーを食べました。

中にティラミスがサンドしてあるバーガーのようなサンドイッチでした。

そんなデザート見たことがなかったので、面白いと思いました。

でも、もう私はパスタを食べた後だったので、友達とシェアすることにしました。

ウエイトレスさんに、フォークとナイフを頼みました。

私は、ティラミスバーガーを二つにカットしようとしましたが、ぐちゃぐちゃになりました。

多分皆さん、状況が想像できるかもしれないですね。

それは、けっこう難しくて、ちょっとパンを押さなくちゃならなくて、中身のティラミスが飛び出してしまいました。

でもね、見た目は最悪だったけど、めっちゃくちゃ美味しかったですよ。

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Tiramisu Burger (100)

I've never seen a dessert like that, so I found it interesting.

However, I already had pasta, so I decided to share it with my friend.

I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.

I tried cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess.

However it tasted really good even though it looked ugly.

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sachisachi

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Tiramisu Burger

However, I already had pasta, so I decided to share it with my friend.

I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.

Maybe you can imagine the situation.

However it tasted really good even though it looked ugly.

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Tiramisu Burger

However, I already had pasta, so I decided to share it with my friend.

Maybe you can imagine the situation.

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Tiramisu Burger

I've never seen a dessert like that, so I found it interesting.

I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.

I tried cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess.

Maybe you can imagine the situation.

Tiramisu Burger

I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.

Maybe you can imagine the situation.

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sachisachi

Nov. 13, 2024

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I had an tiramisu burger at a cafe.


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It was a sandwich with buns and the filling was tiramisu which is Italian dessert.


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I've never seen a dessert like that, so I found it interesting.


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However, I already had pasta, so I decided to share it with my friend.


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This isn't a typo - I mean for there to be two "had"s. This is because you had had your pasta before you decided to share the dessert with your friend.

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I asked a waitress to get me a fork and knife.


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Your original sentence is correct grammar. But, it sounded a little cold/rude.

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I tried cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess.


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I tried to cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess. I tried to cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned out to be a mess.

Or: "I tried to cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it turned into a complete mess" "I tried to cut the tiramisu burger into two, but it was a complete disaster!"

I tried cutting the tiramisu burger into two half, but it turned out to be a mess. I tried cutting the tiramisu burger in half, but it turned out to be a mess.

I think "in two" is OK, but personally, it feels more natural to say "cut in half" than "cut in two."

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Maybe you can imagine the situation.


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Maybe you can imagine the situation. Maybe you can imagine the situation.

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However it tasted really good even though it looked ugly.


However it tasted really good even though it looked uglyyucky/ unappealing/unappetising. However it tasted really good even though it looked yucky/ unappealing/unappetising.

However, it tasted really good even though it looked ugly. However, it tasted really good even though it looked ugly.

I think this sentence would be more natural without "However": "It tasted really good, even though it looked ugly."

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It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuck out.


It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuck outdown on it which made the tiramisu squeeze out of the side. It was quite difficult to cut and I had to press down on it which made the tiramisu squeeze out of the side.

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If the tiramisu was sort of liquid-y or squishy, then "ooze" or "mush" would be better verbs rather than "stuck". The word "stuck" makes it sound like the tiramisu didn't deform at all, which I imagine it probably did.

It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuckquirted out. It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside squirted out.

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It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuck out. It was quite difficult to cut it, and I had to press the buns and the tiramisu inside stuck out.

instead of saying "stuck out", you could say: " the tiramisu inside, started to ooze out"

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