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zanyzoe

Oct. 22, 2025

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Time machine

Oh, it's a hard question.
Can I change my gender?
Because, if I need to stay a woman, past is not the best idea. And I'm little bit afraid of future.
Can I ask for "a future who all people are happy" ? But maybe it get me anywhere and I just rest lost for ever.
And if I can choose my genre, I would like to go Renaissance and met Leonard de Vinci. I asked him to become his student (I used my actual knowledge for convince him.)

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Time machine

Oh, it's a hard question.

Can I change my gender?

Because, if I need to stay a woman, the past is not the best idea.

And I'm little bit afraid of the future.

Can I ask for "a future whoere all the people are happy" ?

But maybe it get me anynowhere and I will just restbe lost for ever.

And if I can choose my gendere, I would like to go theRenaissance period and meet Leonardo de Vinci.

I asked himwill ask to become his student. (I will used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

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zanyzoe

yesterday

3

Thank you !

Oops, I wrote "Leonard de Vinci" in French... bad habit...

Time machine

Oh, it'that’s a hard question.

Can I change my gender?

Because, if I needhave to stay a woman, past is not the best idea.

The phrase “have to” means that it’s a rule or that someone else is saying that it is required. “Need to” means that it’s more of a personal internal thing, not something imposed by an outside force.

And I'm little bit afraid of future.

Can I ask forvisit "a future whoere all people are happy" ?

Since you are answering a question about visiting places using a Time Machine, it makes more sense to ask about a possible visit

But maybe it getwill take me anywhere and I just restbe lost for ever.

And if I can choose my gendere, I would like to go to the Renaissance and meet Leonard de Vinci.

I asked himwould ask to become his student (I would used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

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zanyzoe

yesterday

3

Thank you!

In particular for the difference between "Have to" and "need to"! It will help me!

Time machine

Oh, it's a hard question.

Can I change my gender?

Because, if I need to stay a woman, the past is not the best idea.

And I'm little bit afraid of the future.

Can I ask for "a future whoere all people are happy" ?

But maybe it getwill take me anywhere and I will just restmain lost for ever.

And if I can choose my genre, I would like to go to the Renaissance Era and meet Leonardo de Vinci.

I would asked him to become his student (Iand used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

Since you used the future tense in the previous sentence, I would keep it consistent for clarity.

Feedback

The tenses here are very tricky so I understand the confusion! But the other grammar was well done :)

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zanyzoe

yesterday

3

Yes, conjugation is a bit complicated for me... (T_T)

But thank you very much!

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Can I change my gender?


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Because, if I need to stay a woman, past is not the best idea.


Because, if I need to stay a woman, the past is not the best idea.

Because, if I needhave to stay a woman, past is not the best idea.

The phrase “have to” means that it’s a rule or that someone else is saying that it is required. “Need to” means that it’s more of a personal internal thing, not something imposed by an outside force.

Because, if I need to stay a woman, the past is not the best idea.

And I'm little bit afraid of future.


And I'm little bit afraid of the future.

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And I'm little bit afraid of the future.

Can I ask for "a future who all people are happy" ?


Can I ask for "a future whoere all people are happy" ?

Can I ask forvisit "a future whoere all people are happy" ?

Since you are answering a question about visiting places using a Time Machine, it makes more sense to ask about a possible visit

Can I ask for "a future whoere all the people are happy" ?

But maybe it get me anywhere and I just rest lost for ever.


But maybe it getwill take me anywhere and I will just restmain lost for ever.

But maybe it getwill take me anywhere and I just restbe lost for ever.

But maybe it get me anynowhere and I will just restbe lost for ever.

And if I can choose my genre, I would like to go Renaissance and met Leonard de Vinci.


And if I can choose my genre, I would like to go to the Renaissance Era and meet Leonardo de Vinci.

And if I can choose my gendere, I would like to go to the Renaissance and meet Leonard de Vinci.

And if I can choose my gendere, I would like to go theRenaissance period and meet Leonardo de Vinci.

I asked him to become his student (I used my actual knowledge for convince him.)


I would asked him to become his student (Iand used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

Since you used the future tense in the previous sentence, I would keep it consistent for clarity.

I asked himwould ask to become his student (I would used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

I asked himwill ask to become his student. (I will used my actual knowledge forto convince him.)

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