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Ducky

Dec. 10, 2021

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Time Loop

During last two weeks, every time I went to take the underground, I arrived just when the metro was going out the station. It is a bit strange. I remember a movie named "Groundhog Day" where the main character, Bill Murray, go into a time loop and he is repeating exactly the same day, again and again. An important point in my story is that every time I arrive to station, for luck, I find different people.

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Time Loop

During last two weeks, every time I went to take the underground, I arrived just when the metro was going out the station.

Alt: Over the past two weeks, I kept arriving right as the metro was pulling out of the station every time I went to take the underground.

It is a bit strange.

Alt: It feels a bit strange.

I remember a movie named "Groundhog Day" wherein which the main character, Phil, played by Bill Murray, goes into a time loop and he is repeating exactlyrepeats the same exact day, again and again.

An important point in my story is that every time I arrive to station, for luck, I find different people.

Alt: Luckily for me, I find different people at the station every time I arrive.

It is a bit strange.


It is a bit strange.

Alt: It feels a bit strange.

Time Loop


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During last two weeks, every time I went to take the underground, I arrived just when the metro was going out the station.


During last two weeks, every time I went to take the underground, I arrived just when the metro was going out the station.

Alt: Over the past two weeks, I kept arriving right as the metro was pulling out of the station every time I went to take the underground.

I remember a movie named "Groundhog Day" where the main character, Bill Murray, go into a time loop and he is repeating exactly the same day, again and again.


I remember a movie named "Groundhog Day" wherein which the main character, Phil, played by Bill Murray, goes into a time loop and he is repeating exactlyrepeats the same exact day, again and again.

An important point in my story is that every time I arrive to station, for luck, I find different people.


An important point in my story is that every time I arrive to station, for luck, I find different people.

Alt: Luckily for me, I find different people at the station every time I arrive.

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