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Scarlett_Father

July 13, 2023

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Time is Money

We were all born naked, without any consciousness about money and time. It was a special period for us; our parents invested both their most precious resources, time and money into our upbringing.

When we are young, most us spent a lot of and even most of the time on education, aiming for future career satisfaction and sufficient earnings for a comfortable life. During these periods, money is more essential than time because we use so much time in pursuit of a potential target, money.

As time passes, when all of us grew up. We have or not yet have a job, we at least have some money or we cannot survive in the world. Time is definitely money for all of us. We are social animals, we have to exchange time and money with each other and never stopped until pass away, returning naked as we were at birth to a tomb.

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Time is Money

We were all born naked, without any consciousness about money and time.

It was a special period for us; our parents invested both their most precious resources, time and money into our upbringing.

When we are young, most us spent a lot of andtime, even most of theour time on education, aimfocussing foron future career satisfaction and sufficient earningfunds for a comfortable life.

During these periods, money is more essential than time because we use so much time in pursuit of a potential targetgoal, money.

As time passes by, when all of us greow up.

I would keep these two sentences together.

Wwe have ormay not yet have got a job, but we at least have some money or we cannotwould not be able survive in the world.

Time is definitely signifies money for all of us.

We are social animals, we. We have to exchange time and money with each other and never stopped until we pass away, returning naked as we were at birth to a tomb.

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Scarlett_Father

July 14, 2023

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Thank you very much for your help! :-)

Time is Money

We were all born naked, without any consciousness aboutawareness of money and time.

When we awere young, most of us spent a lot of and even most of theour time on education, aiming for future career satisfaction and sufficient earnings for a comfortable life.

During these periods, money is more essentialvalued more than time because, so we use so muchall our time in pursuit of a potential target, money.

As time passes, when all of us greow up.

We have or have not yet haved a job, we need at least have some money or else we cannot survive in the world.

We are social animals, we havehaving to exchange time and money with each other and never stoppeding until pass awaying, returning naked as we were at birth to a tombwhence we came.

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Scarlett_Father

July 13, 2023

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Than you so much for spending time on corrections! :-)

Time is Money


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We were all born naked, without any consciousness about money and time.


We were all born naked, without any consciousness aboutawareness of money and time.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a special period for us; our parents invested both their most precious resources, time and money into our upbringing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we are young, most us spent a lot of and even most of the time on education, aiming for future career satisfaction and sufficient earnings for a comfortable life.


When we awere young, most of us spent a lot of and even most of theour time on education, aiming for future career satisfaction and sufficient earnings for a comfortable life.

When we are young, most us spent a lot of andtime, even most of theour time on education, aimfocussing foron future career satisfaction and sufficient earningfunds for a comfortable life.

During these periods, money is more essential than time because we use so much time in pursuit of a potential target, money.


During these periods, money is more essentialvalued more than time because, so we use so muchall our time in pursuit of a potential target, money.

During these periods, money is more essential than time because we use so much time in pursuit of a potential targetgoal, money.

As time passes, when all of us grew up.


As time passes, when all of us greow up.

As time passes by, when all of us greow up.

I would keep these two sentences together.

We have or not yet have a job, we at least have some money or we cannot survive in the world.


We have or have not yet haved a job, we need at least have some money or else we cannot survive in the world.

Wwe have ormay not yet have got a job, but we at least have some money or we cannotwould not be able survive in the world.

Time is definitely money for all of us.


Time is definitely signifies money for all of us.

We are social animals, we have to exchange time and money with each other and never stopped until pass away, returning naked as we were at birth to a tomb.


We are social animals, we havehaving to exchange time and money with each other and never stoppeding until pass awaying, returning naked as we were at birth to a tombwhence we came.

We are social animals, we. We have to exchange time and money with each other and never stopped until we pass away, returning naked as we were at birth to a tomb.

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