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Lutis226

April 6, 2025

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Time for a change

Many people don't like their lifes, but they don't try even to change it, because they don't have courage to do that, they are Coward, who blame everything, everyone and every moment in their life, that's why they should realize now that's the happiness is decision, yes the life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will look for you, so you should look for it and work hard to find it by healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith..... etc. So don't procrastinate, try, really what will you lose? You have a dream, an ambitious, for that work hard, be patient, then you will find at least the most important thing; your happiness


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Many people don't like their lifves, but they don't try even to change it, b. Because they don't have the courage to do that, t. They are Ccowards, who blame everything, everyone and every moment inof their life, t. That's why they should realize now that's the happiness a is decision, yes the. Yes, life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will look for you, so. So, you should look for it and work hard to find it by healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith....., etc.

So don't procrastinate, try, really, what will you lose?

You have a dream, an ambitiousn, for that work hard, be patient, t. Then, you will find at least the most important thing; your happiness

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Well done!

Many people don't like their lifves, but they don't try even to change it,them because they don't have the courage to do that, tit. They are Ccoward,s who blame everything, everyone and every moment inof their life, tves on others. That's why they should realize now that's their happiness is a decision, yes the; life is really hard, but youthey should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness willthey look for you, so youcomes from other people. They should look for it and work hard to find it by having healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith..... etc.

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Prepositions and maintain subject agreement “they”

Time for a change

Many people don't like their lifes, but they don't try even to change it, because they don't have courage to do that, tso. They are Ccowards, who blame everything, everyone and every moment in their life, t on someone else. That's why they should realize now that's the happiness is a decision, yes the. Yes, life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will never look for you, so you should look for it and work hard to find it bythough healthy habits, continuityous improvement, optimism, (spark?), passion, faith..... etc.

You blame "on" something or somebody.
I'm not sure what you meant by 'spark'.
Your sentence was way too long, so I tried to separate into several shorter ones.

So don't procrastinate, try, really what will you! Try now, what do you have to lose?

The common expression here is "what do you have to lose?"

YDo you have a dream, an ambitious, for that or a goal? To fufill it, you should work hard, be patient, then you will find at least the most important thing;: your happiness.

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Your ideas are clear, but the sentences are sometimes bit awkward. Try writing shorter sentences, which would be easier to understand and probably easier to write also.

Time for a change


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So don't procrastinate, try, really what will you lose?


So don't procrastinate, try, really what will you! Try now, what do you have to lose?

The common expression here is "what do you have to lose?"

So don't procrastinate, try, really, what will you lose?

You have a dream, an ambitious, for that work hard, be patient, then you will find at least the most important thing; your happiness


YDo you have a dream, an ambitious, for that or a goal? To fufill it, you should work hard, be patient, then you will find at least the most important thing;: your happiness.

You have a dream, an ambitiousn, for that work hard, be patient, t. Then, you will find at least the most important thing; your happiness

Many people don't like their lifes, but they don't try even to change it, because they don't have courage to do that, they are Coward, who blame everything, everyone and every moment in their life, that's why they should realize now that's the happiness is decision, yes the life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will look for you, so you should look for it and work hard to find it by healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith..... etc.


Many people don't like their lifes, but they don't try even to change it, because they don't have courage to do that, tso. They are Ccowards, who blame everything, everyone and every moment in their life, t on someone else. That's why they should realize now that's the happiness is a decision, yes the. Yes, life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will never look for you, so you should look for it and work hard to find it bythough healthy habits, continuityous improvement, optimism, (spark?), passion, faith..... etc.

You blame "on" something or somebody. I'm not sure what you meant by 'spark'. Your sentence was way too long, so I tried to separate into several shorter ones.

Many people don't like their lifves, but they don't try even to change it,them because they don't have the courage to do that, tit. They are Ccoward,s who blame everything, everyone and every moment inof their life, tves on others. That's why they should realize now that's their happiness is a decision, yes the; life is really hard, but youthey should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness willthey look for you, so youcomes from other people. They should look for it and work hard to find it by having healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith..... etc.

Many people don't like their lifves, but they don't try even to change it, b. Because they don't have the courage to do that, t. They are Ccowards, who blame everything, everyone and every moment inof their life, t. That's why they should realize now that's the happiness a is decision, yes the. Yes, life is really hard but you should understand that it's impossible that the change or the happiness will look for you, so. So, you should look for it and work hard to find it by healthy habits, continuity, optimism, spark, passion, faith....., etc.

Many people don't like their lifes, but they don't try even to change it, because they don't have courage to do that, they are Coward, who blame everything, everyone and every moment in their life, that's why they should realize now that's the happiness is decision, yes the life is really hard but you should understand that its impossible that the change or the happiness will look for you, so you should look for it and work hard to find it by healthy habits, continuity, Optimism, spark, passion, faith..... etc.


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