Nov. 25, 2020
Tidying up
I love tidying up. Everything in my room has a specific place, so I like to keep it like that. I also really enjoy getting rid of stuff I don't want or I don't use anymore. The less things I have, the more at peace I am.
As the school year is about to finish, it's a good time to make sure I'm only keeping what I want. I'm going to university next year, so I wanted to make some room for the material I'll be using.
Because I have a brother two years younger than me, I keep my textbooks and notes until I'm sure he won't need them. However, he never asks me for my notes, so it's not worth keeping them. I've decided I'm going to throw away everything that's not going to be useful for me in the future. In my school, during fourth and fifth year of high school, we study chemistry, maths and physics that university students who are doing the CBC (a year in which students are taught the basic knowledge they need in order to do a degree) at the University of Buenos Aires study, so it's better if I keep the notes from those classes.
I have a problem, though. Two of the three drawers my desk has are broken. I don't have much space for storage in my room, so I really need them. They can't be fixed, so I may have to buy a new one. Another solution could be to use my sister's desk, since she is currently living in Germany and doesn't want to come back.
Tidying up
I love tidying up.
Everything in my room has a specific place, soand I like to keep it like that way.
I also really enjoy getting rid of stuff I don't want or I don't use anymore.
The less things I have, the more at peace I am.
As the school year is about to finish, it's a good time to make sure I'm only keeping what I want.
I'm going to university next year, so I wanted to make some room for the material I'll be using.
Because I have a brother two years younger than me, I keep my textbooks and notes until I'm sure he won't need them either.
However, he never asks me for my notes, so I don't think it's not worth keeping them.
"it's not worth keeping them" implies you don't keep them, but you just said you do in the previous sentence. Some possible solutions:
1. "so it's not worth" -> "so I don't think it's worth"
2. "so it's not worth" -> "so at the end of the day, it's not worth"
3. "I keep" in the previous sentence -> "I used to keep"
I've decided I'm going to throw away everything that's not going to be useful for me in the future.
In my school, during our fourth and fifth years of high school, we study chemistry, maths and physics that university students who are doing the CBC (a year in which students are taught the basic knowledge they need in order to do a degree) at the University of Buenos Aires study, so it's better if I keep the notes from those classes.
I have a problem, though.
Two of themy three desk drawers my desk has are broken.
I don't have much space for storage in my room, so I really need themose desk drawers.
They can't be fixed, so I may have to buy a new one.
Another solution could be to use my sister's desk, since she is currently living in Germany and doesn't want to come back.
Nov. 26, 2020
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Tidying up This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love tidying up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everything in my room has a specific place, so I like to keep it like that. Everything in my room has a specific place, |
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I also really enjoy getting rid of stuff I don't want or I don't use anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The less things I have, the more at peace I am. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As the school year is about to finish, it's a good time to make sure I'm only keeping what I want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm going to university next year, so I wanted to make some room for the material I'll be using. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I have a brother two years younger than me, I keep my textbooks and notes until I'm sure he won't need them. Because I have a brother two years younger than me, I keep my textbooks and notes until I'm sure he won't need them either. |
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However, he never asks me for my notes, so it's not worth keeping them. However, he never asks me for my notes, so I don't think it's "it's not worth keeping them" implies you don't keep them, but you just said you do in the previous sentence. Some possible solutions: 1. "so it's not worth" -> "so I don't think it's worth" 2. "so it's not worth" -> "so at the end of the day, it's not worth" 3. "I keep" in the previous sentence -> "I used to keep" |
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I've decided I'm going to throw away everything that's not going to be useful for me in the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my school, during fourth and fifth year of high school, we study chemistry, maths and physics that university students who are doing the CBC (a year in which students are taught the basic knowledge they need in order to do a degree) at the University of Buenos Aires study, so it's better if I keep the notes from those classes. In my school, during our fourth and fifth years of high school, we study chemistry, maths and physics that university students who are doing the CBC (a year in which students are taught the basic knowledge they need in order to do a degree) at the University of Buenos Aires study, so it's better if I keep the notes from those classes. |
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I have a problem, though. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two of the three drawers my desk has are broken. Two of |
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I don't have much space for storage in my room, so I really need them. I don't have much space for storage in my room, so I really need th |
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They can't be fixed, so I may have to buy a new one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another solution could be to use my sister's desk, since she is currently living in Germany and doesn't want to come back. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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