Dec. 5, 2023
Tickets On Sale
Tickets for a small event went on sale from 9 o'clock on Sunday.
I planned to wake up by 8:30 in order to make a phone call at 9:00 sharp.
However, because I had been reading until late the night before, I woke up at just 9 o'clock.
I jumped up, and looked for my smartphone, but unbelievably, it was out of battery.
I panicked and called from my home landline.
Actually, I phoned to call from both smartphone and landline, but I became only from smartphone.
Anytime I tried to call, the call would always be busy, so I redialed many times.
After about 15 minutes, the phone was finally connected.
I was relieved that I could get a ticket.
I recommend charging your smartphone properly and going to bed early the day before the ticket on sale.
ある小さなイベントのチケットが日曜日の９時から発売開始だった。
９時ちょうどに電話をかけるため、８時半までには起きる予定だった。
でも前日夜遅くまで本を読んでいたためか、目が覚めたら９時ちょうどだった。
飛び起きて、スマホを探したら、なんと電源が切れていた。
慌てて家の固定電話でかけた。
本当はスマホと固定電話の両方でかけるつもりだったけど、固定電話だけになってしまった。
何度かけても電話中になるので、何度もリダイヤルした。
15分くらいしたらやっとかかった。
なんとかチケットがとれてホッとした。
チケット発売日の前日はちゃんとスマホの充電をして、早く寝るのをオススメします。
Tickets On Sale
Tickets for a small event went on sale from 9 o'clock on Sunday.
I planned to wake up by 8:30 in order to make a phone call at 9:00 sharp.
However, because I had been reading until late the night before, I woke up at just before 9 o'clock.
I jumped up, and looked for my smartphone, but unbelievably, it was out of battery.
I panicked and called from my home landline.
AnyEvery time I tried to call, the call would always beline was busy, so I redialled many times.
After about 15 minutes, the phone was finally connected.I finally got through.
I was relieved that I could get a ticket.
I recommend charging your smartphone properly and going to bed early the day before the tickets go on sale.!
Dec. 6, 2023
Thank you for your corrections.
Tickets On Sale
Tickets for a small event went on sale fromat 9 o'clock on Sunday.
I planned to wake up by/at 8:30 in order to make a phone call at 9:00 sharp.
However, because I had been reading until late the night before, I woke up at just 9 o'clock.
I jumped up, and looked for my smartphone, but unbelievably, it was out of battery.
I panicked and called from my home landline.
Actually, I pholanned to call from both smartphone and landline, but I became only from smartphoended up only using the landline.
Anytime I tried to call, the call would always be busy, so I redialed many times.
After about 15 minutes, the phone was finally connected.
I was relieved that I could get a ticket.
I recommend charging your smartphone properly and going to bed early the day before the tickets go on sale.
Feedback
I'm glad you got the ticket!
Dec. 6, 2023
Thank you!
Tickets On Sale
Tickets for a small event went on sale from 9 o'clock on Sunday.
I planned to wake up by 8:30 in order to make a phone call at 9:00 sharp.
However, because I had been reading until late the night before, I woke up at just 9 o'clock.
I jumped up, and looked for my smartphone, but unbelievably, it was out of battery / the battery was dead.
I panicked and called from my home landline.
Actually, I phontried to call from both smartphone and landline, but I became only fromswitched to just the smartphone.
AnyEach time I tried to call, the call wouldline was always be busy, so I redialed many times.
After about 15 minutes, the phonecall was finally connected.
I was relieved that I could get a ticket.
I recommend charging your smartphone properly and going to bed early the daynight before the tickets go on sale.
Feedback
It would be more natural if you were to group your sentences into one or two paragraphs instead of starting each sentence on a new line.
Dec. 6, 2023
Thank you for your corrections.
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