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According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of life out of control. In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

To discuss further on these issues, we invited three guests to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday. During our first episode of "career development panel talk", XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of it.

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Thursday Talk Introduction

According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of lifthat their lives are out of control.

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty andbecause of a lack of job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

To discuss further ondiscuss these issues, we invited three guests this Thursday to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

During our first episode of "cCareer dDevelopment panel tTalk"," XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of/or eliminate it.

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According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of life outperceived lack of control.

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety:; irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

To discuss further on these issues further, we invited three guests to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

During our first episode of "cCareer dDevelopment pPanel tTalk", XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of it.

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What you wrote was technically okay but it took me a while to figure out what you meant. What I wrote is unambiguous.

According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of lifetheir lives being out of their control.

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

It's called the oxford comma. Look it up!

To discuss further on these issues further, we invited three guests this Thursday to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

During our first episode of "career development panel talk", XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of it.

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tristanvier

Aug. 22, 2022

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In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

This is not necessarily wrong. Where I live, you get marked wrong for not using the Oxford comma.

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calebmgshort

Aug. 24, 2022

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This is not necessarily wrong. Where I live, you get marked wrong for not using the Oxford comma.

Huh, I learned something new!

Thursday Talk Intro


Thursday Talk IntroSpeech Introduction

What you wrote was technically okay but it took me a while to figure out what you meant. What I wrote is unambiguous.

Thursday Talk Introduction

According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of life out of control.


According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of lifetheir lives being out of their control.

According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of life outperceived lack of control.

According to recent data from the XXX, up to 62% of American white-collar workers are experiencing high stress, extreme fatigue, or a sense of lifthat their lives are out of control.

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.


In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

It's called the oxford comma. Look it up!

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety:; irritability at work, fear of uncertainty and job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

In the highly stressful tech industry, many workers have experienced workplace anxiety: irritability at work, fear of uncertainty andbecause of a lack of job security, and frustration with a denied promotion are common in this environment.

To discuss further on these issues, we invited three guests to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.


To discuss further on these issues further, we invited three guests this Thursday to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

To discuss further on these issues further, we invited three guests to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

To discuss further ondiscuss these issues, we invited three guests this Thursday to share their experiences dealing with workplace anxiety this Thursday.

During our first episode of "career development panel talk", XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of it.


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During our first episode of "cCareer dDevelopment pPanel tTalk", XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of it.

During our first episode of "cCareer dDevelopment panel tTalk"," XXX, XXX, and XXX will analyze the causes of workplace anxiety and share their tips to relieve and get rid of/or eliminate it.

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