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Intenta usar un punto (.) con más frecuencia. Ayudará con el ritmo del párrafo y separar sus frases así que personas aquí pueden corregir frases más facilmente. Es verdad que las personas ingléses dicen que 'There're' cuando hablar pero es mala gramática y necesita ser 'There are' cuando escribes algo :)

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Usualmente en inglés 'to think' es usado con 'about' contra de 'piensar en' en español :)

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Los errores eran pequeños aquí y te he ofrendo unas suggestiones que son más naturales en inglés. También puedes decir 'I decided to get into it in order to learn more' pero es más formal. Cuando escribes 'There was a link for this page so I'm listening ...' parece que el link(?) te hizo escuchar la canción y 'and' funciona mejor aquí :)

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To dress up means to dress formally. To get dressed means to put clothes on that you would go outside wearing.

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'Did exercises' implies school work. For example one might do grammar exercises or maths exercises.

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