Jan. 28, 2024
Sitting at the familiar café right now, I'm going to have an appointment with K this afternoon. My head is a bit dizzy, because of the enormous amount of coffee I drank.
My friends usually call me a coffee addict since I have to drink at least two cups a day. I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter - the Phin - a stainless steel tool that I use for brewing my coffee. But I skipped my daily routine this morning to go to the rendezvous - our preferred café.
Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with El Salvadoran coffee beans, cinnamon, and a special kind of South American sugar whose name I forget. To make this drink, the barista used a French Press, rather than the usual filter, to extract the coffee grounds. It's so damn good; I can clearly smell the cinnamon scent in the air. After the first sip, my mouth is filled with a pleasant, light sweetness. There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something really enjoy.
By the way, I asked the barista to help me grind the pack of beans that M. gave me. I told him to try the taste of it as well. Then I went to a table upstairs and did my job. Fifty minutes later, he came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was also "Coffee de Olla" and the other was from my beans. He said they were bonus or me; thanking me for asking him to grind the beans, he realized that the grinder had ground the wrong size.
Thu, 25.01.24
SI'm sitting at the familiarmy usual café right now,. I'm going to have an appointment with K this afternoon.
My head isI feel a bit dizzy, because of the enormous amount of coffee I drank.
My friends usually call me a coffee addict since I have to drink at least two cups a day.
I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter - the Phin - a stainless steel tool that I use for brewing my coffee.
But I skipped my daily routine this morning to go to theon a rendezvous -/date at our preferred café.
Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with El Salvadoran coffee beans, cinnamon, and a special kind of South American sugar whose name I forget.
To make this drink, the barista used a French Press, rather than the usual filter, to extract the coffee grounds.
It's so damn good; I canould clearly smell the cinnamon scent in the air.
After the first sip, my mouth iwas filled with a pleasant, light sweetness.
There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy.
Or : The bean also had some fruity flavours which I love.
By the way, I asked the barista to help me grind the pack of beans that M. gave me.
I told him to try thehave a taste of it as well.
Then I went to a table upstairs and did my jobsome work.
He said they were bonus or m the house; thanking me for asking him to grind the beans, and also because he realized that the grinder had ground the beans the wrong size.
Wow he's thanking you for asking him to help you 😯what a nice barista! 😌
Sitting at the familiar café right now, I'm going to have an appointment with K this afternoon.
My head is a bit dizzy, because of the enormous amount of coffee I drank.
My friends usually call me a coffee addict since I have to drink at least two cups a day.
I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter - the Phin - a stainless steel tool that I use for brewing my coffee.
But I skipped my daily routine this morning to go to the rendezvous - our preferred café.
Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with El Salvadoran coffee beans, cinnamon, and a special kind of South American sugar whose name I forget.
To make this drink, the barista used a French Press, rather than the usual filter, to extract the coffee grounds.
It's so damn good; I can clearly smell the cinnamon scent in the air.
After the first sip, my mouth is filled with a pleasant, light sweetness.
There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy.
By the way, I asked the barista to help me grind the pack of beans that M. gave me.
I told him to try the taste of it as well.
"Try it" already implies tasting it. Also sounds more natural this way
Then I went to a table upstairs and did my jobwork.
Fifty minutes later, he came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was also "Coffee de Olla" and the other was(one) was made from my beans.
He said they were a bonus for me; t. Thanking me fors to me asking him to grind the beans, he realized that the grinder had groundwas in the wrong grind size.
Added "thanks to me,..." to make the sentence more connected.
I think the latter half is what you mean. I don't know anything about coffee grinding.
My head isI feel a blittle dizzy, because of the enormous amount ofhow much coffee I drank.
We would say that we feel dizzy, not that our head feels dizzy.
The comma is unnecessary.
While not technically incorrect, we usually wouldn't say something like "enormous" or "large", we use "how much" in these situations.
I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter - the Phin - a stainless steel tool that I use for brewing my coffeecalled the Phin.
The explanation at the end isn't necessary, we know it's used for making coffee from "make my coffee at home".
But today I skipped my dailymorning routine this morning to go to theour rendezvous - our preferredthe café.
I switched a couple things around for clarity.
Added "today" to the beginning to better show that today's an exception to the norm.
Made daily routine into morning routine since we haven't been through the entire day yet.
Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with El Salvadoran coffee beans, cinnamon, and a special kind of South American sugar whose name I forget.
Salvadoran is the correct demonym.
After tThe first sip, filled my mouth is filled with a pleasant, light sweetness.
It's more clear to use more active voice here.
There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy.
Fixed typo with not having "I" there.
By the way,I forgot to mention it, but I asked the barista to help me grind the pack of beans that M. gave me.
"I forgot to mention it" is a more natural expression here.
I told him to try the taste of it as well.
"the taste of" isn't necessary since he'll already be tasting it when trying it.
Then I went to a table upstairs and did my jobwork.
We would use "work" here since it sounds like you're working on things for your job at the café.
Fifty minutes later, the barista came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was alsothe "Coffee de Olla" and the other was fromone of my beans.
Replace "also" with "the" since it's the first item in the list and we're familiar with it from before. We should also specify that it's the barista for clarity.
He said they were a bonus for me; thanking me for asking him to grind the beans, he realized that the grinder had ground the wrong size.
If the beans were damaged in that process then it'd be more of an apologetic gesture than a thankful one, I'm not sure exactly what that last part is saying though.
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Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with El Salvadoran coffee beans, cinnamon, and a special kind of South American sugar whose name I forget. Today I chose a signature called "Coffee de Olla", made with Salvadoran is the correct demonym. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
To make this drink, the barista used a French Press, rather than the usual filter, to extract the coffee grounds. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It's so damn good; I can clearly smell the cinnamon scent in the air. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's so damn good; I c |
After the first sip, my mouth is filled with a pleasant, light sweetness.
It's more clear to use more active voice here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After the first sip, my mouth |
There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something really enjoy. There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy. Fixed typo with not having "I" there. There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy. There are also fruity flavors to the bean, which is something I really enjoy. Or : The bean also had some fruity flavours which I love. |
By the way, I asked the barista to help me grind the pack of beans that M. gave me.
"I forgot to mention it" is a more natural expression here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I told him to try the taste of it as well. I told him to try "the taste of" isn't necessary since he'll already be tasting it when trying it. I told him to try "Try it" already implies tasting it. Also sounds more natural this way I told him to |
Then I went to a table upstairs and did my job. Then I went to a table upstairs and did my We would use "work" here since it sounds like you're working on things for your job at the café. Then I went to a table upstairs and did my Then I went to a table upstairs and did |
Fifty minutes later, he came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was also "Coffee de Olla" and the other was from my beans. Fifty minutes later, the barista came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was Replace "also" with "the" since it's the first item in the list and we're familiar with it from before. We should also specify that it's the barista for clarity. Fifty minutes later, he came up and gave me two more coffee bottles, one was |
Sitting at the familiar café right now, I'm going to have an appointment with K this afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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My head is a bit dizzy, because of the enormous amount of coffee I drank.
We would say that we feel dizzy, not that our head feels dizzy. The comma is unnecessary. While not technically incorrect, we usually wouldn't say something like "enormous" or "large", we use "how much" in these situations. My head is a bit dizzy
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My friends usually call me a coffee addict since I have to drink at least two cups a day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter - the Phin - a stainless steel tool that I use for brewing my coffee. I usually make my coffee at home with a Vietnamese filter The explanation at the end isn't necessary, we know it's used for making coffee from "make my coffee at home". This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
But I skipped my daily routine this morning to go to the rendezvous - our preferred café. But today I skipped my I switched a couple things around for clarity. Added "today" to the beginning to better show that today's an exception to the norm. Made daily routine into morning routine since we haven't been through the entire day yet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But I skipped my daily routine this morning to go to |
He said they were bonus or me; thanking me for asking him to grind the beans, he realized that the grinder had ground the wrong size. He said they were a bonus for me; thanking me for asking him to grind the beans, he realized that the grinder had ground the wrong size. If the beans were damaged in that process then it'd be more of an apologetic gesture than a thankful one, I'm not sure exactly what that last part is saying though. He said they were a bonus for me Added "thanks to me,..." to make the sentence more connected. I think the latter half is what you mean. I don't know anything about coffee grinding. He said they were Wow he's thanking you for asking him to help you 😯what a nice barista! 😌 |
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