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Three Wishes of Alexander

He was known as Alexander the Great.
He conquered the world before he turned 33, but when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.
Lying on his deathbed in Babylon, he gathered his generals and made three wishes.
First that only his doctors should carry his coffin to show that no medicine can stop death when it comes.
Second that the road to his grave be strewn with gold, silver and jewels, so all may see how worthless riches are in the end.
And third that his hands be left hanging outside his coffin, so the world would know the conqueror of empires leaves with nothing.
He ruled nations, yet in his final breath, Alexander revealed the Greatest truth: no one conquers death and no one takes more than a memory.


亚历山大的三个愿望
他被称为大帝。
他在33岁之前就征服了世界。
但当死神降临的时候连亚历山大都无法命令死神等待
躺在巴比伦的病床上,他召集他的将军们说了三个愿望。
首先,只有他的医生抬着他的棺材,以表明当死亡来临时,没有药物可以阻止死亡。
第二,在他通往坟墓的路上,撒满金银珠宝,好叫众人看见财宝到最后是何等无用。
第三,他的双手要悬挂在棺椁之外,这样世界就会知道,这位帝国的征服者死后带不走分毫。
他统治各个国家,然而在他生命的最后一刻,亚历山大告诉所有人一个最伟大的真相:生者皆有限,唯记忆永存。

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He was known as Alexander the Great.

He conquered the world before he turned 33, but when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.

Lying on his deathbed in Babylon, he gathered his generals and made three wishes.

First, that only his doctors should carry his coffin to show that no medicine can stop death when it comes.

Second, that the road to his grave be strewn with gold, silver and jewels, so all may see how worthless riches are in the end.

And third, that his hands be left hanging outside his coffin, so the world would know the conqueror of empires leaves with nothing.

He ruled nations, yet in his final breath, Alexander revealed the Ggreatest truth: no one conquers death and no one takes more than a memory.

‘great' is only really capitalised in the context of religious statements e.g. 'God is Great'

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Three Wishes of Alexzander


They called him the Great.


The man who conquered the world before he turned 33.


But when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.


Lying on his death bed in Babylon, he gathered his generals and said three wishes.


First that only his doctors carry his coffin to show that no medicine can stop death when it comes.


Second that the road to his grave be strewn with gold, silver and jewels, so all may see how worthless riches are in the end.


Second, that the road to his grave be strewn with gold, silver and jewels, so all may see how worthless riches are in the end.

And third that his hands be left hanging outside his coffin, so the world would know the conqueror of empires leaves with nothing.


And third, that his hands be left hanging outside his coffin, so the world would know the conqueror of empires leaves with nothing.

He ruled nations, yet in his final breath, Alexzander taught the Greatest truth of all that no one conquers death and no one takes more than a memory.


They called him Alexander the Great.


Three Wishes of Alexander


Lying on his deathbed in Babylon, he gathered his generals and made three wishes.


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First that only his doctors should carry his coffin to show that no medicine can stop death when it comes.


First, that only his doctors should carry his coffin to show that no medicine can stop death when it comes.

He was known as Alexander the Great.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He conquered the world before he turned 33, but when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.


He conquered the world before he turned 33, but when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.

He ruled nations, yet in his final breath, Alexander revealed the Greatest truth: no one conquers death and no one takes more than a memory.


He ruled nations, yet in his final breath, Alexander revealed the Ggreatest truth: no one conquers death and no one takes more than a memory.

‘great' is only really capitalised in the context of religious statements e.g. 'God is Great'

The man who conquered the world before he turned 33, but when death came for Alexzander even he couldn't command it to wait.


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