abc90377's avatar
abc90377

June 7, 2024

0
Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends

New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertainty makes me uneasy. I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time. But still, I want to try new things consciously. Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.Visit a jazz cafe.
I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.
2.Learn how to crochet.
I have been watching videos of crochet on YouTube for a while. Maybe it is time to make something with my own hands.
3.Attend an online fan meeting.
My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly. I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous. So, I'll push myself to take the first step.

Corrections

But sStill, I want to try new things consciouslysometimes.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a firsto try it.

ALSO POSSIBLE: Three Things I Want to Try Bbefore the Year Ends

ALSO POSSIBLE: New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertaintyies makes me uneasy.

I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time.

But still,MY GUESS: But still, from time to time I want to try new things consciously.

Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
(1) Visit a jazz cafe.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.

2.(2) Learn how to crochet.

MORE SUCCINCTLY: I have been watching videos of crochetcrocheting videos on YouTube for a while.

Maybe it is time for me to make something with my own hands.

3.(3) Attend an online fan meeting.

My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly.

I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous.

So, I'll push myself to take the first step.

Feedback

Hope your 3 plans come to fruitition!

abc90377's avatar
abc90377

June 9, 2024

0

Thank you so much! I hope I can accomplish all of them :)

Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends

New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertainty makes me uneasy.

I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time.

But still, I want to make an effort to try new things consciously.

Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.

2. Learn how to crochet.

I have been watching videos of crochet on YouTube for a while.

Maybe it is time to make something with my own hands.

3. Attend an online fan meeting.

My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly.

I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous.

So, I'll push myself to take the first step.

abc90377's avatar
abc90377

June 9, 2024

0

Thank you so much!

Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends

Stylistically you do not capitalise every word in the title

New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertainty makes me uneasy.

I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time.

But still, I want to try new things consciously.

Here are the three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.

2. Learn how to crochet.

I have been watching videos of crochet on YouTube for a while.

Maybe it is time to make something with my own hands.

3. Attend an online fan meeting.

My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly.

I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous.

So, I'll push myself to take the first step.

abc90377's avatar
abc90377

June 9, 2024

0

Thank you so much!

Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends

New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertainty makes me uneasy.

I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time.

But still, I want to try new things consciously / deliberately.

I think “deliberately” would make more sense here than “consciously.”

Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

Insert a space (press the space bar on your keyboard) after every period.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.

2. Learn how to crochet.

I have been watching {crochet videos | videos of crocheting} on YouTube for a while.

I added another alternative.

Maybe it is time to make something with my own hands.

3. Attend an online fan meeting (fan club?).

Feedback

We don’t have anything called an “idol group” in the US, so I’ll skip those sentences and let someone who knows more about this topic correct them.
:-)

abc90377's avatar
abc90377

June 9, 2024

0

Thank you so much :)

But still, I want to try new things consciously.


But still, I want to try new things consciously / deliberately.

I think “deliberately” would make more sense here than “consciously.”

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But still, I want to make an effort to try new things consciously.

But still,MY GUESS: But still, from time to time I want to try new things consciously.

But sStill, I want to try new things consciouslysometimes.

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a first try.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have never listened to a live jazz performance, and a jazz cafe sounds like a good place for a firsto try it.

2.Learn how to crochet.


2. Learn how to crochet.

2. Learn how to crochet.

2. Learn how to crochet.

2.(2) Learn how to crochet.

I have been watching videos of crochet on YouTube for a while.


I have been watching {crochet videos | videos of crocheting} on YouTube for a while.

I added another alternative.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

MORE SUCCINCTLY: I have been watching videos of crochetcrocheting videos on YouTube for a while.

Maybe it is time to make something with my own hands.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe it is time for me to make something with my own hands.

3.Attend an online fan meeting.


3. Attend an online fan meeting (fan club?).

3. Attend an online fan meeting.

3. Attend an online fan meeting.

3.(3) Attend an online fan meeting.

My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My favorite Japanese idol group holds online fan meetings regularly.

I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous, so I will push myself to take the first step.


Here are three things I want to try this year: 1.Visit a jazz cafe.


Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

Insert a space (press the space bar on your keyboard) after every period.

Here are the three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
Visit a jazz cafe.

Here are three things I want to try this year:
1.
(1) Visit a jazz cafe.

I always thought I would join after improving my Japanese, but I think I am just nervous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, I'll push myself to take the first step.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here are three things I want to try this year: 1.Go to a jazz cafe.


I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal.


Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Three Things I Want to Try Before the Year Ends

Stylistically you do not capitalise every word in the title

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ALSO POSSIBLE: Three Things I Want to Try Bbefore the Year Ends

New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertainty makes me uneasy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ALSO POSSIBLE: New experiences are good, but sometimes the uncertaintyies makes me uneasy.

I am the type of person who goes to the same restaurant and orders the same meal every time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium