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Three Little Dragons

Three little dragons

Once upon a time, there were three little dragons named Juliet, Teddy, and Vince. They were all brothers, and they lived in a cave deep in the mountains. Juliet was the smallest dragon, with bright red spine and a long tail. Teddy was a bit bigger, with an orange spine and a short, stocky body. Vince was the biggest dragon, with a yellow spine and a long, powerful tail.

One day, the three little dragons decided to go on an adventure to see the world outside their cave. They flew through the mountains, over the forests, and across the oceans. They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.

As they flew, they came across a village and saw the villagers running and screaming in fear, as a giant dragon was attacking the village and burning down their houses. The three little dragons knew they had to do something to help.

Juliet flew straight at the giant dragon, breathing a stream of fire and distracting it from the village for a few moments. Teddy flew in from behind, and with his short, stocky body, he was able to knock the dragon off balance. Vince, the largest of the three, flew for the final blow, and with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing with the ground and remaining unconscious.

In this way, the village was saved, and the villagers were very grateful to the three little dragons for their bravery. From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindered as heroes. And they flew back to their cave, happy to have saved the village and to have had such a great adventure together.

The End


Los tres pequeños dragones

Érase una vez, tres pequeños dragones llamados Juliet, Teddy y Vince. Todos eran hermanos, y vivían en una cueva en las montañas. Juliet era la dragona más pequeña, con una columna roja brillante y una cola larga. Teddy era un poco más grande, con una columna naranja y un cuerpo corto y robusto. Vince era el dragón más grande, con una columna amarilla y una cola larga y poderosa.

Un día, los tres pequeños dragones decidieron ir a una aventura para ver el mundo fuera de su cueva. Volaron por las montañas, sobre los bosques y a través de los océanos. Vieron paisajes increíbles y conocieron a muchas criaturas nuevas, pero siempre estaban juntos, viéndose unos a otros, como deberían hacer los hermanos.

Mientras volaban, se encontraron con un pueblo en el que vieron a los aldeanos corriendo y gritando de miedo, mientras un dragón gigante estaba atacando el pueblo y quemando sus casas. Los tres pequeños dragones sabían que tenían que hacer algo para ayudar.

Juliet voló directamente hacia el dragón gigante, expeliendo una corriente de fuego y distrayéndolo del pueblo por unos instantes. Teddy voló desde atrás, y con su cuerpo corto y robusto, pudo desequilibrar al dragón. Vince, el más grande de los tres, voló para el golpe final, y con su poderosa cola, hizo caer al dragón gigante, chocando este con el suelo y permaneciendo inconsciente.

De esta manera, salvaron al pueblo, quedando los aldeanos agradecidos a los tres pequeños dragones por su valentía. A partir de ese día, los tres pequeños dragones eran conocidos y recordados como héroes. Y volaron de regreso a su cueva, felices de haber salvado al pueblo y haber tenido una gran aventura juntos.

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Three Little Dragons

Three little dragons

Once upon a time, there were three little dragons named Juliet, Teddy, and Vince.

They were all brothers, and they lived in a cave deep in the mountains.

Juliet was the smallest dragon, with a bright red spine and a long tail.

Teddy was a bit bigger, with an orange spine and a short, stocky body.

Vince was the biggest dragon, with a yellow spine and a long, powerful tail.

One day, the three little dragons decided to go on an adventure to see the world outside their cave.

They flew through the mountains, over the forests, and across the oceans.

They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.

As they flew, they came across a village and saw the villagers running and screaming in fear, as a giant dragon was attacking the village and burning down their houses.

The three little dragons knew they had to do something to help.

Juliet flew straight at the giant dragon, breathing a stream of fire and distracting it from the village for a few moments.

Teddy flew in from behind, and with his short, stocky body, he was able to knock the dragon off balance.

Vince, the largest of the three, flew in for the final blow, and, with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing with to the ground and remainingknocking it unconscious.

In this way, the village was saved, and the villagers were very grateful to the three little dragons for their bravery.

From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindembered as heroes.

And they flew back to their cave, happy to have saved the village and to have had such a great adventure together.

The End

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Very cute story! Well done!

Three Little Dragons

Three little dragons

Once upon a time, there were three little dragons named Juliet, Teddy, and Vince.

They were all brothers, and they lived in a cave deep in the mountains.

Juliet was the smallest dragon, with bright red spine and a long tail.

Teddy was a bit bigger, with an orange spine and a short, stocky body.

Vince was the biggest dragon, with a yellow spine and a long, powerful tail.

One day, the three little dragons decided to go on an adventure to see the world outside their cave.

They flew through the mountains, over the forests, and across the oceans.

They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.

As they flew, they came across a village and saw the villagers running and screaming in fear, as a giant dragon was attacking the village and burning down their houses.

The three little dragons knew they had to do something to help.

Juliet flew straight at the giant dragon, breathing a stream of fire and distracting it from the village for a few moments.

Teddy flew in from behind, and with his short, stocky body, he was able to knock the dragon off balance.

Vince, the largest of the three, flew for the final blow, and with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing withto the ground and remainbecoming unconscious.

In this way, the village was saved, and the villagers were very grateful to the three little dragons for their bravery.

From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindembered as heroes.

And they flew back to their cave, happy to have saved the village and to have had such a great adventure together.

The End

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Very good structure and a wide variety of different tenses, great work!

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They were all brothers, and they lived in a cave deep in the mountains.


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They were all brothers, and they lived in a cave deep in the mountains.

Juliet was the smallest dragon, with bright red spine and a long tail.


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Juliet was the smallest dragon, with a bright red spine and a long tail.

Teddy was a bit bigger, with an orange spine and a short, stocky body.


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Teddy was a bit bigger, with an orange spine and a short, stocky body.

Vince was the biggest dragon, with a yellow spine and a long, powerful tail.


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Vince was the biggest dragon, with a yellow spine and a long, powerful tail.

One day, the three little dragons decided to go on an adventure to see the world outside their cave.


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They flew through the mountains, over the forests, and across the oceans.


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They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.


They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.

They saw incredible landscapes and met many new creatures, but they were always together, seeing one another, as the brothers should do.

As they flew, they came across a village and saw the villagers running and screaming in fear, as a giant dragon was attacking the village and burning down their houses.


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The three little dragons knew they had to do something to help.


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Juliet flew straight at the giant dragon, breathing a stream of fire and distracting it from the village for a few moments.


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Teddy flew in from behind, and with his short, stocky body, he was able to knock the dragon off balance.


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Vince, the largest of the three, flew for the final blow, and with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing with the ground and remaining unconscious.


Vince, the largest of the three, flew for the final blow, and with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing withto the ground and remainbecoming unconscious.

Vince, the largest of the three, flew in for the final blow, and, with his powerful tail, made the giant dragon fall, crashing with to the ground and remainingknocking it unconscious.

In this way, the village was saved, and the villagers were very grateful to the three little dragons for their bravery.


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In this way, the village was saved, and the villagers were very grateful to the three little dragons for their bravery.

From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindered as heroes.


From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindembered as heroes.

From that day forward, the three little dragons were known and remindembered as heroes.

And they flew back to their cave, happy to have saved the village and to have had such a great adventure together.


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