March 15, 2022
Three Funny Pacifiers
Some days ago I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began to sketching. This is the finished work. This item features a lovely illustration of some sympathetic pacifiers lying from a rope. All of them, make a nice and joyful picture. Each pacifier is painting in beautiful and showy colors. It is perfect for childish decoration and events.
Three Funny Pacifiers
Some days ago, I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began to sketching.
This is the finished work.
This itemmage features a lovely illustration of some sympathetic pacifiers lyhanging from a rope.
All of them, make a nice and joyful picture.
Each pacifier is paintinged in beautiful and showy colors.
Instead of showy, you could use: bright, nice, wonderful.
It is perfect for a childish's decoration and events for children.
OR, you could write, "It's is perfect to decorate a child's room with, or for events like a kid's birthday party or a baby shower".
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There were some minor issues, mostly issues that make the entry a little difficult to read. Otherwise, great job! And the picture is very nice :)
Three Funny Pacifiers
Some days ago, I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began to sketching.
This is the finished work.
This itemmage features a lovely illustration of some sympathetic pacifiers lyhanging from a rope.
I'm not sure what you mean by "sympathetic" here. "Sympathy" refers to a common feeling between people.
All of them, make a nice and joyful picture.
Consider "They" instead of "All of them" as well.
Each pacifier is paintinged in beautiful and showy colors.
It is perfect for childish decorations and events.
Feedback
nice :]
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Some days ago I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began to sketching. Some days ago, I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began Some days ago, I was thinking that an image with pacifiers could be funny, so I began to sketch |
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This item features a lovely illustration of some sympathetic pacifiers lying from a rope. This i I'm not sure what you mean by "sympathetic" here. "Sympathy" refers to a common feeling between people. This i |
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All them, make a nice and joyful picture. |
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Each pacifier is painting in beautiful and showy colors. Each pacifier is paint Each pacifier is paint Instead of showy, you could use: bright, nice, wonderful. |
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It is perfect for childish decoration and events. It is perfect for childish decorations and events. It is perfect for a child OR, you could write, "It's is perfect to decorate a child's room with, or for events like a kid's birthday party or a baby shower". |
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All of them, make a nice and joyful picture. All of them Consider "They" instead of "All of them" as well. All of them |
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