How long it has been without writing!

Have you missed me?

Alternatively, and more naturally, you can write "Did you miss me?"

Nobody said that studying engineering and being a normal person would be easy, especially when your laptop goes off and avoidbreaks down and prevents you from doing your homework and learning English.

go off: (of a gun, bomb, or similar device) explode or fire; (of an alarm) begin to sound.
break down: (of a machine or motor vehicle) suddenly cease to function.

But, I´m already here, ready to tell you about what happened the night that my friendship with Fanny got screwed offup.

screw off: leave.
get screwed up: go wrong.

Previously, I wrote you that she and I went to a party where things became weird.

That night, on the 10th of April, I was at a party with Alessandro and Ivan, who are my friends.

And in the fully vibrating music, my eyes were watching Monse (one of my acquaintances inat the class dance) s. She looked at me and I made a sign to her for goingsignalled to her to go out.

If you meant to say that you and Monse are in the same class, then you should write "one of my acquaintances in dance class".

In the backyard I kissed her and my hand felt her butt and backward.

I was so happy atin the moment, not because I kissed Monse but because I felt invincible.

So I called Fanny and told her I would be at her house atin 5 minutes to gotake her to the party.

She agreed that I went foro me fetching her.

I'm not too sure what you meant to say here, so I took my best guess at it.

I was drunk while I drove to her home, and I was i on my motorcycle.

It's much more natural to express it this way.

I hadn´t had an accident untilbefore that day, but when she got on my motorcycle, we fell out ofat a corner before the party´s placvenue.

If you want to introduce the accident involving Fanny in the same sentence, it is more natural to use "before" instead of "until". "party's venue" is also more natural-sounding than "party's place", but you can also say "party place" (without the apostrophe).

The rest of the night she was indifferent with myselfcold towards me, and alcohol is not a good adviser, so I was insisting on her to dance, buting, even though she didn´t want ito.

"even though" seems to me like the better choice; it places more emphasis on the fact that insisting that Fanny dance was a bad idea.

My friends noticed it and took me outmy stupor and decided to take me to our deapartment.

Although I convinced them to get on the motorcycle, and we threealthough we three (OR the three of us) in the vehicle were avoiding cars, driving under the speed limit, and inat the last corner tobefore our destinyation, we crashed out.

I moved "although" behind the first clause, since "I convinced them to get on the motorcycle" has nothing to do with you crashing the vehicle.

At least we onlygot a laughed to the death, out of it; we were so drunk that we didn´t notice the damage to my vehicle.

So we just got into the apartment and went off.

"went off" isn't used this way.

That night I lost everything, my motorcycle (which still works but not as well as it should), my friendship with Fanny (and the chance of a relationship) and my dignity (maybe she thinks I´m fucking stalker), soweirdo), and I learned to not havinge a date while you are drunk, especially when she is not.

stalker: a person who harasses or persecutes someone with unwanted and obsessive attention.

I don't see how you'd be perceived as a stalker; maybe "weirdo" or "loser" would be more appropriate.

I hope you can understand the main history, and itplot, and that the paragraph doesn't look so large.

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How long has it been without writing!

Nobody said that studying engineering and being a normal person would be easy, especially when your laptop goes off and avoidshuts down and keeps you from doing your homework and learning English.

But, I´m already here, ready to tell you about what happened the night that my friendship with Fanny screwed offfell apart.

Previously, I wrote to you that she and I went to a party where things became weird.

And in the fullloud vibrating music, my eyes were watchlooking at Monse (one of my acquaintances in the class dance)dance class), she looked at me and I made a sign to her forsignaled to me that she was going out.

In the backyard, I kissed her and my hand felt her butt and backwardside.

I was so happy at theis moment, not because I kissed Monse but because I felt invincible.

So, I called Fanny and told her that I would be at her house atin 5 minutes to go to the party.

She agreed that I weant fored to go with her.

I hadn´t had an accident until that day, but when she got on my motorcycle, we fell out ofn a corner before the party´s place.

She was wellfine, but my motorcycle wasn´t.

The rest of the night she was indifferent with myselfe, and alcohol is not a good adviser, so I was insisting on her to dance, but she didn´t want it.

Although, I convinced them to get on the motorcycle, and wthe three of us in the vehicle were avoiding cars, driving under the speed limit, and in the last corner towas our destiny, and we crashed out.

At least, we only laughed to the death, we were so drunk that we even didn´t notice the damages done to my vehicle.

So, we got into the apartment and went off.

That night, I lost everything, my motorcycle (still works but not as it should), my friendship with Fanny (and the chance of a relationship) and my dignity (maybe she thinks I´m fucking stalker), so I learned to not havinge a date while you are drunk, specially when she is not.

I hope you can understand the main historycontent, and it doesn't look so largebad.

There are so many details that I couldn´t write, but that´is is the general idea of what happened.

If you wish my next posts to be shorter or longer in my next posts, please tell me in the feedback section, I would appreciate it.

See you.

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