Aug. 22, 2022
Thoughts on education
There are differing opinions on whether entertaining lessons are the best option for educating people. A substantial amount of individuals believe that dynamic classes are more enjoyable for students. On the other hand, some people assert that a serious lesson is more understandable. I, myself, prefer classes which are presented in a formal manner.
First of all, a serious class allows people to focus solely on the subject of matter. Whereas an "entertaining" lesson encourages students to get distracted. In this sense, a formal model of class is useful when a professor is teaching a hard science, such as Mathematics, since pupils can follow along with the logical reasoning without thinking about anything else.
Secondly, a formal lesson leaves a good impression of the teacher on the students. When I was in highschool, I had a Mathematics teacher who used this approach when lecturing. I remember that I was amazed with this magnificent way of teaching. I held this professor in high regard. As a matter of fact, this class inspired me to pursue a career on engineering. This exhibits how a serious type of teaching may improve the impression a student holds of a professor.
Lastly, the learning pace is higher in a serious class. When a professor teaches using a formal approach, students can dedicate more time to learning the subject, instead of carrying out activities which are not directly related to the topic. By using "entertaining" activities, teachers tend to loose valuable time that may be used instead in learning something else.
To sum up, formal lessons allow to think only about the topic of the class. Besides, a serious education may inspire people. When teachers use a formal approach, the learning pace of the class is higher. Forethere, I consider that formal, serious classes are absolutely better than "entertaining" classes.
Thoughts on eEducation
There are differing opinions on whether entertaining lessons are the best option for educating people.
A substantial amount of individuals believe that dynamic classes are more enjoyable for students.
On the other hand, some people assert that a serious lesson is more understandable.
I, myself, prefer classes which are presented in a formal manner.
First of all, a serious class allows people to focus solely on the subject of matterwhereas an "entertaining" lesson encourages students to get distracted.
Whereas an "entertaining" lesson encourages students to get distracted.
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In this sense, a formal model of class is useful when a professor is teaching a hard science, such as Mathematics, since pupils can follow along with the logical reasoning without thinking about anything else.
Secondly, a formal lesson leaves a good impression of the teacher on the students.
When I was in high school, I had a Mathematics teacher who used this approach when lecturing.
I remember that I was amazed with this magnificent way of teaching.
I held this professor in high regard.
As a matter of fact, this class inspired me to pursue a career oin engineering.
This exhibitdemonstrates how a serious styple of teaching may improve the impression a student holds of a professor.
Lastly, the learning pace is higher in a serious class.
When a professor teaches using a formal approach, students can dedicate more time to learning the subject, instead of carrying out activities which are not directly related to the topic.
By using "entertaining" activities, teachers tend to loose valuable time that may be used instead in learning something else.
To sum up, formal lessons allow to think onlying about the topic of the class only.
Besides, a serious education may inspire people.
When teachers use a formal approach, the learning pace of the class is higher.
ForetheTherefore, I consider that formal, serious classes are absolutely better than "entertaining" classes.
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ForetheTherefore, I consider that formal, serious classes are absolutely better than "entertaining" classes.
Thoughts on education
There are differing opinions on whether entertaining lessons are the best option for educating people.
A substantial amount of individuals believe that dynamic classes are more enjoyable for students.
On the other hand, some people assert that a serious lesson is more understandable.
I, myself, prefer classes which are presented in a formal manner.
First of all, a serious class allows people to focus solely on the subject of matter.
Whereas an "entertaining" lesson encourages students to get distracted.
In this sense, a formal model of class is useful when a professor is teaching a hard science, such as Mmathematics, since pupils can follow along with the logical reasoning without thinking about anything else.
Secondly, a formal lesson leaves a good impression of the teacher on the students.
When I was in high school, I had a Mmathematics teacher who used this approach when lecturing.
I remember that I was amazed with this magnificent way of teaching.
I held this professor in high regard.
As a matter of fact, this class inspired me to pursue a career oin engineering.
This exhibits how a serious type of teaching may improve the impression a student holds of a professorthe professor makes on the students.
This is worded a bit unnaturally. Impression is used slightly differently from how you're using it. You make an impression on others, you don't really receive an impression from someone else.
Lastly, the learning pace is higher in a serious class.
When a professor teaches using a formal approach, students can dedicate more time to learning the subject, instead of carrying outoccupying themselves with activities which are not directly related to the topic.
Wording here is a bit unnatural again.
By using "entertaining" activities, teachers tend to loose valuable time that may be used instead in learning something else.
Loose: The opposite of being tight
Lose: The opposite of to win
To sum up, formal lessons allow the students to think only about the topic of the class.
Saying, "In conclusion" is better for a class assignment :)
BesidesFurthermore, a serious education may inspire people.
Besides is informal in this context
When teachers use a formal approach, the learning pace of the class is higher.
Forethere, I consider that formal, serious classes are absolutely better than "entertaining" classes.
I would use different phrasing for "are absolutely better". Perhaps use "are more advantageous"
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Your writing is amazing. I was only correcting your formality and style because everything else was perfect :)
Aug. 22, 2022
Thank you so much for your feedback!
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