July 11, 2023
Thoughts (not mine)
de Goulle complained that it's impossible to run the country which has 246 kinds of cheese. Adam Smith told that the more crafts has a town, the richer it is.
The more complicated is the system, the it's more easy to be free for one inside it. And therefore that society is more liveable. And vice versa: the simpler are the system and the society, the easier its to run it, and the more poor it is.
Thoughts (not mine)
dDe Goulle complained that it's impossible to run the country which has 246 kinds of cheese.
Adam Smith told that the more crafts has a town has, the richer it is.
I would have personally used 'said that' instead of 'told that', but both are correct
The more complicated is the system is, the it's more easyeasier it is to be free for someone inside it.
'one inside it' is correct but sounds incredibly formal (google received pronunciation).
When using an adjective to compare something, the adjective needs to be in the comparative.
And therefore that society is more liveable.
And vice versa: the simpler are the system and the society are, the easier it is to run it, and the mpoore poor it is.
'more poor' could be considered correct but I would stay consistent with the previous clause and use the comparative again.
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Good text.
The only major things were putting adjectives into the comparative and verb order.
July 11, 2023
thank you!
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de Goulle complained that it's impossible to run the country which has 246 kinds of cheese.
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Adam Smith told that the more crafts has a town, the richer it is. Adam Smith told that the more crafts I would have personally used 'said that' instead of 'told that', but both are correct |
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The more complicated is the system, the it's more easy to be free for one inside it. The more complicated 'one inside it' is correct but sounds incredibly formal (google received pronunciation). When using an adjective to compare something, the adjective needs to be in the comparative. |
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And therefore that society is more liveable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And vice versa: the simpler are the system and the society, the easier its to run it, and the more poor it is. And vice versa: the simpler 'more poor' could be considered correct but I would stay consistent with the previous clause and use the comparative again. |
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