July 15, 2023
Japan is a unique country that strides toward embracing Western politics and democracy, while preserving its traditions in certain aspects.
I stayed at a hotel that with a cross sign on the wall, reflecting freedom of religion in my eyes; It was common to see a mix of traditional film cameras and the latest digital cameras piled on the shelves; In some downtown restaurants, the boss only accepted cash and declined credit card. A Bitcoin ATM, however, can be found in a building in Osaka. Anyone can find what they prefer in the markets of Japan.
Some people around me tend to claim that Japan was a student of ancient China. Their claim is partially true and partially incorrect. As far as I know, Japan has stopped learning from China over 1000 years. Osaka, the city I visited just days ago. The mastermind of this city - Toyotomi Hideyoshi, even planned to invade China around the 16th century, but her efforts were halted in Korea. The philosophy of Confucianism which has been established over 2,500 years in China, had shaped Japanese society and I get to know some individuals desire themslves from Confucianism's influence, but it's a big challenge for them.
Thoughts About Travel in Japan (2)
Japan is a unique country that stridves toward embracing Wwestern politics and democracy, while preserving its traditions in certain aspects.
I stayed at a hotel that withhad a cross sign on the wall, reflecting freedom of religion in my eyes;. It was common to see a mix of traditional film cameras and the latest digital cameras piled on the shelves;. In some downtown restaurants, the boss only accepted cash and declined credit card.
'cross sign' is redundant (and 'cross symbol' would be better anyways) since most, if not all, of English speakers are aware of Christianity.
A Bitcoin ATM, however, can be found in a building in Osaka.
Anyone can find what they preferwant in the markets of Japan.
Some people around me tend to claim that Japan was a student of ancient China.
Their claim is partially true and partially incorrect.
As far as I know, Japan has stopped learning from China over 1000 years ago.
Osaka, the city I visitedI visited [the city of] Osaka just days ago.
Here 'the city of' is optional.
The mastermind of this city - Toyotomi Hideyoshi, even planned to invade China around the 16th century, but her efforts were halted in Korea.
The philosophy of Confucianism which has been established over 2,500 years in China, had shaped Japanese society and I get to know some individuals desire to remove themselves from Confucianism's influence, but it's a big challenge for them.
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Thoughts About Travel in Japan (2)
Japan is a unique country that strides toward embracing Western politics and democracy, while preserving its traditions in certain aspects.
I stayed at a hotel that with a cross sign on the wall, reflecting freedom of religion in my eyes;. It was common to see a mix of traditional film cameras and the latest digital cameras piled on the shelves;. In some downtown restaurants, the boss only accepted cash and declined credit cards.
A Bitcoin ATM, however, can be found in a building in Osaka.
Anyone can find what they prefer in theJapan's markets of Japan.
Some people around me tend to claim that Japan was a student of ancient China.
Their claim is partially true and partially incorrect.
As far as I know, Japan has stopped learning from China over 1000 years ago.
Osaka, is the city I visited just days ago.
The mastermind of this city - Toyotomi Hideyoshi, even planned to invade China around the 16th century, but her efforts were halted in Korea.
The philosophy of Confucianism which has been established over 2,500 years in China, had shaped Japanese society and I geot to know some individuals desire distancing themselves from Confucianism's influence, but it's a big challenge for them.
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