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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while that I have practiced English grammar in structured way . It's very overwhelming to self learn all things. But, it is very rewarding at the end. Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals. I have high expectations from me as my family also have.I was thinking that I should write 200 -300words per day in order to improve my writing skills fast. I know its a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible. I don't want to live a mediocre life anymore. I want meaningful life driven with purpose and faith. My future plans are that I should be master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively. I want demonstrable skills. (give me marks out of 10)

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Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while that I havesince I practiced English grammar in a structured way .

It's very overwhelming to self -learn all everythings.

But, it is ultimately very rewarding at the end.

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

My family and I have high expectations from me as my family also haveof me .I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fastquickly.

I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I want a meaningful life driven withby purpose and faith.

My future plans are that I should begoal is to master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively، communicate persuasively and develop demonstrable skills.

Your original sentence is grammatically correct!

I want demonstrable skills.

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Amaan

July 1, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in structured way .

1. When writing contractions, the comma serves as the omitted letter(s). In this case, the H and A in “it has” is being omitted, so we get “it’s”. There is no second S that needs to be added
2. When talking about a how long it’s been since an action has taken place, the word “since” is used, not “that”.

It's very overwhelming to self learn all thingseverything by yourself.

1. “Self learn” does not exist in English. The best replacement I can think of is “learn by yourself/myself”
2. “All things” is also not a commonly said string of words. The word “everything” should be said here instead

But, it is very rewarding atin the end.

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

1. The word “have” is not needed here, as you’re talking in the basic past tense, not the present perfect

My family and I have high expectations from me as my family also have.or myself. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to quickly improve my writing skills fast.

1. The last part of that sentence doesn’t make sense. And by English sentence structure, you should say “My family and I have” at the beginning of the sentence
2. “For me” in this context does not work, you should say “for myself” instead
3. Having “fast” at the end of this sentence works, but sounds a bit odd. A better way to say this would be to put the word “quickly” in front of improve

I know its a very challenging task, but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

An apostrophe is needed here. The “its” without an apostrophe is used when talking about something belonging to an object or animal

I want a meaningful life driven withby purpose and faith.

My future plans are that I should be a master atof my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

Not sure what “persuasively” means at the end of this sentence means, unless you’re trying to say you want to talk in a way that convinces people to do things, then I’d advise taking it out

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Your English is amazing! I’d give you an 8/10 here, you have an advanced vocabulary and a good understanding of the language. Most of the errors I saw were grammar or sentence structure related. Good job! :D

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

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PacificOcean

June 30, 2025

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I can try yea. For me I turn on a YouTube video in my target language for listening practice and write on here for writing practice. One of my friends is also a native speaker of my target language so I practice with him when I can. If you don’t have access to a target speaker I’m sure there’s ways to find some online to practice with :)
I’m not sure exactly what to recommend to you as I’ve mostly been just figuring things out as I go. I find that talking with and being corrected by native speakers helps a lot.

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Okay Thanks !!

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Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in structured way .

I have high expectations from meof myself, as do my family also have. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fastquickly.

I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I want a meaningful life driven with purpose and faith.

My future plans are that I should be a master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

(give me a marks out of 10)

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(8/10) I had no problem understanding the text, the message was very clear. Some nice advanced vocabulary used as well, the only problems were the odd missing word or a few errors with punctuation.

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

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Hey, Ggood morning everyone ,. Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in a structured way .

It's very overwhelming to self learn all thingseverything by myself.

I think "self-learn" as a verb is fine in casual contexts, but I think splitting it is generally more natural, and would definitely be preferable in a more formal context.

But, it is very rewarding atin the end.

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

"I have made" sounds like you did the action at an unspecified time in the past. However, since you said "last night", the two don't really work together. Instead, either of the following would be correct:

1. "Last night, I made a..."
2. "I have (or I've) made a..."

I have high expectations from me as my family also have.or myself and so does my family. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fast.

When saying that someone else has or does something you've already mentioned, it's most natural to use "and so does" or "as does".

For example:

I like playing football, and so does my brother.
I often go for walks, and so do my parents.
He used to eat fish, and so did his sister.
They like cycling, as do their friends.

I think that the comma is optional.

I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I don't want to live a mediocre life anymore.

I want a meaningful life driven with purpose and faith.

"Driven with" implies that something else is the cause and that purpose and faith are things you take along with you.
"Driven by" implies that purpose and faith are the causes behind your meaningful life.

"Driven with" is not incorrect but depending on what you mean "driven by" might fit better.

My future plans are that I should be a master atof my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

I want demonstrable skills.

(give me marks out of 10)

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I'd say 9/10. Most of the mistakes were relatively minor and didn't get in the way of the meaning of the text. I hope you reach your July goals!

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

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fesgtep

June 30, 2025

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You're very welcome. I'm not sure I'm really qualified to give language learning advice since I've only been learning another language for a few months now haha. I think that consistency is quite important because as long as you put some effort in every day, even if you're not using the most optimal method to learn, you'll still improve over time. You seem to have quite a solid grasp of English so I guess trying to interact with English speakers as much as possible might be useful.

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

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Okay thanks !!

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Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while that I have practiced English grammar in structured way .


Hey, Ggood morning everyone ,. Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in a structured way .

Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in structured way .

Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while thatsince I have practiced English grammar in structured way .

1. When writing contractions, the comma serves as the omitted letter(s). In this case, the H and A in “it has” is being omitted, so we get “it’s”. There is no second S that needs to be added 2. When talking about a how long it’s been since an action has taken place, the word “since” is used, not “that”.

Hey, Good morning everyone , Its's been a while that I havesince I practiced English grammar in a structured way .

It's very overwhelming to self learn all things.


It's very overwhelming to self learn all thingseverything by myself.

I think "self-learn" as a verb is fine in casual contexts, but I think splitting it is generally more natural, and would definitely be preferable in a more formal context.

It's very overwhelming to self learn all thingseverything by yourself.

1. “Self learn” does not exist in English. The best replacement I can think of is “learn by yourself/myself” 2. “All things” is also not a commonly said string of words. The word “everything” should be said here instead

It's very overwhelming to self -learn all everythings.

But, it is very rewarding at the end.


But, it is very rewarding atin the end.

But, it is very rewarding atin the end.

But, it is ultimately very rewarding at the end.

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.


Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

"I have made" sounds like you did the action at an unspecified time in the past. However, since you said "last night", the two don't really work together. Instead, either of the following would be correct: 1. "Last night, I made a..." 2. "I have (or I've) made a..."

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

1. The word “have” is not needed here, as you’re talking in the basic past tense, not the present perfect

Last night, I have made a structured plan to execute my July goals.

I have high expectations from me as my family also have.I was thinking that I should write 200 -300words per day in order to improve my writing skills fast.


I have high expectations from me as my family also have.or myself and so does my family. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fast.

When saying that someone else has or does something you've already mentioned, it's most natural to use "and so does" or "as does". For example: I like playing football, and so does my brother. I often go for walks, and so do my parents. He used to eat fish, and so did his sister. They like cycling, as do their friends. I think that the comma is optional.

I have high expectations from meof myself, as do my family also have. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fastquickly.

My family and I have high expectations from me as my family also have.or myself. I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to quickly improve my writing skills fast.

1. The last part of that sentence doesn’t make sense. And by English sentence structure, you should say “My family and I have” at the beginning of the sentence 2. “For me” in this context does not work, you should say “for myself” instead 3. Having “fast” at the end of this sentence works, but sounds a bit odd. A better way to say this would be to put the word “quickly” in front of improve

My family and I have high expectations from me as my family also haveof me .I was thinking that I should write 200 -300 words per day in order to improve my writing skills fastquickly.

I know its a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.


I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I know its a very challenging task, but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

An apostrophe is needed here. The “its” without an apostrophe is used when talking about something belonging to an object or animal

I know it's a very challenging task but I should manage to get there as soon as possible.

I don't want to live a mediocre life anymore.


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I want meaningful life driven with purpose and faith.


I want a meaningful life driven with purpose and faith.

"Driven with" implies that something else is the cause and that purpose and faith are things you take along with you. "Driven by" implies that purpose and faith are the causes behind your meaningful life. "Driven with" is not incorrect but depending on what you mean "driven by" might fit better.

I want a meaningful life driven with purpose and faith.

I want a meaningful life driven withby purpose and faith.

I want a meaningful life driven withby purpose and faith.

My future plans are that I should be master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.


My future plans are that I should be a master atof my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

My future plans are that I should be a master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

My future plans are that I should be a master atof my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively.

Not sure what “persuasively” means at the end of this sentence means, unless you’re trying to say you want to talk in a way that convinces people to do things, then I’d advise taking it out

My future plans are that I should begoal is to master at my skillset and be able to effectively communicate persuasively، communicate persuasively and develop demonstrable skills.

Your original sentence is grammatically correct!

I want demonstrable skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want demonstrable skills.

(give me marks out of 10)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(give me a marks out of 10)

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