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Pyppat

Jan. 22, 2025

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My addiction to listening music is literally making me lose my hearing. My ears started to get really painful and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of exams that I need to do. I'm not really scared of but I think that will be very hard to get use to new habits without music.


Meu vício em ouvir música está literalmente me fazendo perder audição. Meus ouvidos começaram a ficar muito doloridos e eu precisei ir no médico, ele me deu uma lista de exames para fazer. Eu não estou com medo, mas eu acho que vai ser muito difícil me adaptar a novos hábitos sem musica.

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My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painfulsore and I needed to go to the doctor, h. He gave me a list of exams that I need to do.

I'm not really scared of (hearing loss?) but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

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My addiction to listening to music is literally makcausing me to lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painfulwere really starting to hurt and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of examtests that I need to do.

I'm not really scared of them/the tests but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

I don't understand what you mean with "it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music"

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Good job. Keep it up.

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My addiction to listening music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painfulhurt and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of exams that I need to do.

I'm not really scared of but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits withoutot listening to music.

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Eu me identifico 😔 Eu costumava ouvir música 24/7, e minha mente estava sempre barulhenta. Agora, ouço menos e ouço mais podcasts.

My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painfulhurt and I needed to go to the doctor, h. He gave me a list of exams that I need to dohave done.

I'm not really scared of, but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

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I'm always listening to music too, so I can understand how you feel! I hope your ears can recover.

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My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painful and I needed to go to the doctor,; he gave me a list of exams that I need to dohave done.

It sounds more natural this way, because it's clearer that the exams are being done *to* you. You can also say "exams that I need to undergo," which is a little more formal.

I'm not really scared of, but I think thait will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

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Great! Your English is already very natural. Hope everything goes well.

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Pyppat

Jan. 22, 2025

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Thank you for the corrections! :))

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My addiction to listening music is literally making me lose my hearing.


My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

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My addiction to listening to music is literally makcausing me to lose my hearing.

My addiction to listening to music is literally making me lose my hearing.

My ears started to get really painful and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of exams that I need to do.


My ears started to get really painful and I needed to go to the doctor,; he gave me a list of exams that I need to dohave done.

It sounds more natural this way, because it's clearer that the exams are being done *to* you. You can also say "exams that I need to undergo," which is a little more formal.

My ears started to get really painfulhurt and I needed to go to the doctor, h. He gave me a list of exams that I need to dohave done.

My ears started to get really painfulhurt and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of exams that I need to do.

My ears started to get really painfulwere really starting to hurt and I needed to go to the doctor, he gave me a list of examtests that I need to do.

My ears started to get really painfulsore and I needed to go to the doctor, h. He gave me a list of exams that I need to do.

I'm not really scared of but I think that will be very hard to get use to new habits without music.


I'm not really scared of, but I think thait will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

I'm not really scared of, but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

I'm not really scared of but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits withoutot listening to music.

I'm not really scared of them/the tests but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

I don't understand what you mean with "it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music"

I'm not really scared of (hearing loss?) but I think that it will be very hard to get used to new habits without music.

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